专题16 读后续写6大靓丽开头绝招和高分副词的使用+对点精练 读后续写6大靓丽开头绝招 Part 1 六招高分开头技巧 第一招: 非谓语开头 Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.他小心翼翼地环顾四周,溜进了房间,轻轻地关上门。 Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. 简感到失望,不得不再呆一夜。 Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.她感到神清气爽,继续沿着小溪散步,寻找出去的路。 第二招:形容词短语开头 Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么,踮着脚尖走进了黑暗的洞穴。 Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.一句话也说不出来,他就楞在了原地。 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 突然,一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。 Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. 我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物,我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。 文章给的提示句是:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们不知道自己在哪里,天变黑了。 Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 我又累又饿,想知道我们能不能找到回去的路。 第三招:副词开头 Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。 Joyfully ,he skipped up the street.他很高兴地跳过了街道。 Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 立刻,一片黑暗笼罩着森林。 第四招:对话或独白开头 :“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“让我们看看谁先到那里去!”瑞秋一边叫着,一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。 "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. “上车!” 保罗对麦克喊道。 第五招:背景描写 We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way(我们开车穿过了几个州,沿途看到了很多好风景。) I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys, holding me entirely in their fascination. 我望着车窗外,蜿蜒的河流,高耸的山脉,阳光明媚的海滩和深邃的山谷,完全吸引了我的注意力。 第六招:行为描写 Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk. 当他看到他的主人从抽屉里拿出一条皮带时,Furry开始摇,绕着圈跑。Furry准备好了晚上的散步。 Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom 爸爸和我相互看了一眼。 为什么不露营来满足妈妈? 对点精练==汉译英 第一招:非谓语开头 1.听到外面的吵闹声,她悄悄地打开窗户往外看。 _____, she cautiously opened the window and peeked out. 感到紧张,他深吸了一口气,然后走进了面试室。 _____, he took a deep breath and then walked into the interview room. 第二招:形容词短语开头 1.困惑不解,他再次审视了这个问题。 _____, he examined the problem once again. 2.对于即将到来的旅行充满兴奋,他开始收拾行李。 _____, he began to pack his luggage. 第三招:副词开头 1.耐心地,老师一遍又一遍地解释这个复杂的概念。 _____, the teacher explained the complex concept over and over again. 2.突然,一道闪电划破了夜空 ... ...
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