专题06 建议信 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友,对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议,或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括: (1)建议投稿内容; (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意:(1)词数100左右; (2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _____ Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 ① 首段: a.介绍自己,不要罗嗦; b. 说明目的,注意语气。 ② 主体: a. 提出具体建议; b. 首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信; c. 经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文。 ③尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,使对方易于接受。 3. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 介绍详情、说明原因 提出建议 希望采纳、盼望回复 【写作模板】 模板① Dear_____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to_____, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _____(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your_____(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear_____, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _____(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to _____. Then, it also helps to _____. Besides, it should be a good idea to _____. You can also _____. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下) As to _____, I suggest _____(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _____(其他的建议). I’m sure _____(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope _____(表达愿望)。 【必备词汇】 1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议 2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 3.as follows 如下 4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来 5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用 6.take part in/participate in... 参加 7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议 8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内 9.with regard to 关于;就 10. put forward 提出 11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面 12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 13.with time going on 随着时间的推移 14. Be faced with 面临 15.take sth. seriously 重视;认真对待 【万能句式】 第一部分:说明写信的目的 套语: 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the fu ... ...
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