专题32 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类(第02期) (2024·北京·中考真题) 某英文网站正在开展以“记好友,叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最好的一位朋友,并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。 提示词语:kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support 内容提示: ·Who is your best friend Please describe him/ her. ·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her. I’m glad to say something about my best friend. _____ 【答案】One possible version: I’m glad to say something about my best friend. Her name is Alice. She is helpful and always has a sweet smile on her face. She is really good at dancing. Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. She encouraged me a lot and helped me practice the moves. Together, we gave a very successful performance. I will never forget this experience. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,介绍经历用“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍你最好的朋友并进行描述; 第二步,分享你们之间发生的一次难忘的经历。 [亮点词汇] ①have a smile on one’s face面带微笑 ②sign up for报名参加 ③a large crowd of一大群 ④a very successful performance一个非常成功的表演 [高分句型] ①Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. (There be句型) ②We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. (并列句) (2024·山东潍坊·中考真题) Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站,近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华,请阅读原帖后,结合自己的经历,用英语跟帖。 注意: 1. 80词左右; 2. 不要出现考生本人信息; 3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。 Teens Around the World Subject: problems and solutions Hey, guys! We have to face all kinds of problems in our daily life. However, different problems have different solutions. What problem did you meet and how did you solve it Please share your story with us. Harry, Australia _____ Li Hua, China 【答案】 例文 I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. To solve this, I started practicing every day. I listened to English songs, watched English movies, and imitated the pronunciation of native speakers. Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates. Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. This experience taught me the importance of persistence and practice. Li Hua, China 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:根据所给的帖子中提到的信息,结合自己的经历,介绍自己遇到的问题及解决方法,注意逻辑清晰,语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步,点明主题———遇到的问题; 第二步,具体介绍解决问题的方法; 第三步,讲述解决问题后的收获。 [亮点词汇 ... ...
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