Unit 5 Save the endangered animals 单元话题满分范文必背 基础语篇巩固练 1．（23-24八年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·阶段练习）假如你是李瑞，最近阅读了网络上一篇有关保护濒危动物的文章而深受触动。请根据以下信息给美国好友 Mary写一封电子邮件，并说说作为一名中学生，你能为保护动物做些什么。 写作要点： 1. 告诉 Mary 许多动物正濒临灭绝的事实(例如：熊猫和鲸) 2. 介绍动物濒临灭绝的原因： (1)没有足够的食物和居住的空间； (2)树木被砍伐，河水被污染； (3)遭到捕杀。 3. 至少写出两件中学生能为保护濒危动物所做的事。 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 (4)至少80词 Dear Mary, How is everything going _____ Waiting for your reply. Yours, Li Rui 【答案】例文： Dear Mary, How is everything going I’m writing to share ideas from an online article about protecting endangered animals. It really moved me recently. Many animals are in danger of dying out, such as pandas and whales. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, they don’t have enough food and living space. Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. Moreover, some animals are hunted for their fur, meat or other parts. As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. For example, I can join volunteer groups to clean up the places where animals live. What’s more, I will tell people around me the importance of protecting animals and ask them not to buy things made from animals. Let’s work together to make the world a better place for these lovely creatures. Waiting for your reply. Yours, Li Rui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图，引出“保护濒临动物”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物濒临灭绝的原因、如何保护濒危动物”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger of处于……的危险中 ②cut down砍倒 ③what’s more更重要的是 [高分句型] ①Secondly, people cut down trees and pollute rivers, which destroys their habitats. (非限定性定语从句) ②As a middle school student, I believe I can do something to help. (宾语从句) 2．（23-24八年级下·陕西西安·阶段练习）在当今世界，很多野生动物都濒临灭绝。在我国，老虎是重点保护动物。请根据以下表格所提供的信息，以“Tigers are in danger”为题, 写一篇英文短文, 号召大家行动起来保护动物。 外貌 大而强壮；黑条纹(dark stripes) …… 特点 跑得快；擅长捕捉其他动物 生存现状 人类捕杀：没有足够的食物…… 拯救措施 减少森林砍伐…… 要求： 1.文中必须包含所有要点，不能逐条翻译，可拓展思路，适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的班级与人名； 3. 条理清楚、字迹工整，词数80———100。 Tigers are in danger _____ 【答案】例文 Tigers are in danger Tigers are the largest living cats in the world. They are big and strong. They have bright eyes. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They look so powerful! Tigers can run very fast. They are good at hunting other animals for food. People think th ... ...
