Unit5 Amazing nature单元话题（神奇的大自然）写作满分范文15篇（原卷版＋解析版）2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（外研版2024）

学校:_____姓名：_____班级：_____考号：_____ Unit 5 Amazing nature 单元话题（神奇的大自然）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假设你是李明，你的英国笔友 Tom 对地球上的不同景观很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍一种你喜欢的景观（如河流、沙漠、海洋、森林），包括它的特点、重要性以及我们应该如何保护它。 要求： 1. 语言通顺，逻辑清晰； 2. 80 词左右。 _____ 【答案】参考例文 Dear Tom, I’m extremely glad to tell you about my favorite landscape. I like the forest best. The forest is full of tall and green trees. It’s like a big green world. It produces a great deal of oxygen for us to breathe. Also, it is a comfortable home for many lovely animals. It’s really crucial to our life. But now, many forests are being cut down by people. We should take action right away. Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest. Best wishes! Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：介绍最喜欢的自然景观，并谈谈它的特点、重要性以及我们应如何保护它；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最喜欢的景观是什么，它的特点及重要性； 第二步，谈谈我们该如何保护这类景观。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of 充满 ②a great deal of 大量 ③cut down 砍倒 ④take action 采取行动 [高分句型] Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.（祈使句） 2．英语课上，老师让学生们把收集到的关于亚马孙热带雨林和撒哈拉沙漠的资料进行整理讨论。请你根据他们搜集的资料，用英语写一篇介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的短文，分享给同学们。 Name Amazon Rainforest Sahara Desert Location (位置) in South America in the north of Africa Climate hot and wet hot and dry Plants over 80,000 kinds, such as bananas and hot lips About 500 kinds, such as desert roses and olive trees (橄榄树) Animals monkeys, snakes, birds... camels, desert foxes... 写作要求： 词数不少于 60个。 _____ 【答案】例文 Amazon Rainforest The Amazon Rainforest is in South America. It’s hot and wet. It is home to many plants and animals. The plants grow fast and well. The kinds of plants are over 80,000, such as bananas and hot lips. They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on. Sahara Desert The Sahara Desert is in the north of Africa. It’s big. The climate of the Sahara Desert is very hot. It’s also very dry and rains little. There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. There you can see animals like camels, desert foxes and so on. Do you want to go and see them 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，直接介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠； 第二步，具体阐述亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的位置、气候、植被、动物等； 第三步，书写结语，表达对马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的美丽自然风光的向往 ... ...