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课件网) Writing about a diving experience Unit 5 What an adventure! To read an adventure poster; To make notes about your adventure experience; To write your adventure trip. Learning objectives Read the poster and get information about the diving programs. Choose the diving program What diving programs are available What can you see and do Which program appeals to you more The Farne Islands, UK Let’s dive! Look back on the adventure: what did you see shipwreck seaweed forests grey seal coral reefs schools of fish jumped off the ship chased after me/gave me a bite petted/stroked the grey seal explored the wreck Look back on the adventure: what did you see views actions feelings Descriptive Writing content language Collect writing techniques Discuss how Jules Verne describes the undersea adventure so vividly. Use adjectives and adverbs to add more details. Collect writing techniques this dazzling carpet wonderful intensity Collect writing techniques _____ jumped off the shipwreck _____ chased after me gave me a _____ bite schools of _____ fish the _____ shipwreck gracefully/bravely naughtily/curiously playful/harmless unusual/fearsome mysterious/sleeping Use adjectives/adverbs to describe the following views/actions. Collect writing techniques Use comparison to describe unfamiliar experiences. Collect writing techniques Use simile/metaphor (比喻) to create a vivid image. Collect writing techniques Use comparison/figurative speech to describe the following experiences. as if than as...as like The grey seal was as cute as a puppy. I jumped off the wreck as if I was a bird flying off the mountain. Collect writing techniques Write a diary entry about your diving adventure views actions feelings language Descriptive Writing adjectives/adverbs comparison/contrast metaphor/simile(比喻) … content structure opening + body + ending What did you do What did you see How did you feel Imagine you have been on this adventure. Make notes about your experience. Now write a diary entry about your adventure. Writing Beginning Main character(s) Time Place Give basic information about a diving experience I, my parents, instructors one day The Farne Islands Given the layout, you can add more. Writing Give basic information about a diving experience 例如： Seeing the poster, I want a diving experience with my parents. I want to experience an undersea adventure one day. I want to explore the magical undersea world around Farne Island. Beginning Given the layout, you can add more. Writing What happened 例如： Seeing the wrecked ship Somail, I felt as though she were about to set sail once again! What surprised/attracted me most was that…. Swimming with Farne’s most lovely grey seals, I could experience…. Main body Given the layout, you can add more. Writing Show your own feelings 例如： Diving turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined. The world here was so quiet that it felt that time had stopped ... ...
