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专题06 书面表达（解析版） 深圳南山区九年级中考一模 46．积极的心态可以帮助我们更好地应对生活中的压力和挫折。学校的英文校刊正在以“The power of positive thinking”为题进行征文。请你根据以下写作要点和要求，用英文写一篇短文，向校刊投稿。 写作要点： 1.积极的心态对你的帮助（具体事例）； 2.你对如何调整心态的建议。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右。 The power of positive thinking _____ 【答案】例文 The power of positive thinking Positive thinking has always been a powerful tool in our life. It helped me during a challenging math exam. I was so nervous that I thought I would fail. But then I thought about the good things. I remembered how much I studied and that I can do hard things. This made me feel better and I tried my best. Guess what I did much better than I thought! To be positive, try to be happy about small things. Spend time with friends who make you feel good. Thank people who help you. These things can help you feel positive. Let’s use positive thinking to make our lives happier and more successful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明积极心态的好处； 第二步，具体举例说明积极心态对你的帮助； 第三步，分享如何调整心态的建议。 [亮点词汇] ① much better好得多 ② Guess what猜猜看 ③ challenging有挑战性的 [高分句型] ① I was so nervous that I thought I would fail. (that引导结果状语从句) ② I remembered how much I studied and that I can do hard things. (how much和that引导宾语从句) ③ Spend time with friends who make you feel good. Thank people who help you. (who引导定语从句) 深圳市31校联考中考二模 46．在学习生活中，我们经常需要与人合作。假如你是学生李华，你的英国好友Mike想了解你们学校的学生如何合作学习，请你写一封邮件和他分享一次你与同学合作的经历，并谈谈你的感想与收获。 参考词汇：团队合作 teamwork 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Knowing that you are interested in teamwork in my school life, I am glad to _____ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, Knowing that you are interested in teamwork in my school life, I am glad to share with you one of my experiences. Last month, I cooperated with my classmates to give a report on an English novel. First, we had a discussion to decide on the book. We chose The Adventure of Tom Sawyer which features attractive characters and interesting plots. Then, we were separated into different teams. We met after class every day to exchange ideas. Sometimes we had different opinions, but we always listened to each other patiently and tried to reach an agreement. Through this task, I have improved my communication skills and learned how to work well in a team. It was a valuable experience for me. Have you ever worked with others Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua ... ...