/ 让教学更有效 精品试卷 | 英语学科 2025春八下英语期末专项复习（新考向）单元写作Unit 7 教材词句促写作 教材写作情境 Write a paragraph about whales and why they need to be protected. (教材P56 3b) 情境解读 本单元教材写作情境为“介绍鲸鱼以及保护鲸鱼的原因 ”，属于“人 与自然 ”主题范畴中“ 自然生态 ”这一主题群，涉及子主题“热爱与敬畏 自然，与自然和谐共生 ”。此类写作要求学生能够运用本单元比较级、最 高级等语言知识点，从某种动物的基本信息、生存现状、保护它的原因以 及保护措施等角度介绍一种动物，通常以一般现在时为主。 本单元话题在近3年全国中考试题中的考查角度涉及：①介绍某个国 家或地区[3考]；②谈论如何保护环境[3考]；③介绍某种动物[2023湖南张 家界]。 以读促写 教材写作范文 Whales are the biggest animals living in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea life. Sometimes they can jump high out of the water. One interesting fact is that whales can sing songs. However ， some kinds of whales are in great danger of dying out. One of the main reasons is that humans catch whales for meat ， fat and oil. Another reason is that whale parts can make things like candles and soap. As far as I know ， water pollution is worse than before. That is also the main reason. Whales are our friends. It is important to protect them ， such as by making rules on whale protection and stopping putting rubbish into the sea. We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more whales. 结构分析 佳句积累 1 . As far as I know ， there are no other man-made objects as big as this.(P50 2d) 1. 据我所知，鲸鱼比之前更少了。(用As far as I know翻译) As far as I know ， there are fewer whales than before. 2. Some kinds of whales are in danger because…(P56 3b) 2. 由于人类活动，这些动物处于极大的危险之中。(用in danger翻译) These animals are in great danger because of human activities./Because of human activities ， these animals are in great danger. 3. One of the main reasons is that people want to challenge themselves in the face of difficulties.(P51 3a) 3. 污染产生的最重要的原因之一是人类到处扔垃圾。(用One of the + adj.最高级翻译) One of the most important reasons for the pollution is that humans throw rubbish everywhere. 4. We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more pandas.(P54 2b) 4. 我们都希望人们停止捕捉野生动物，让它们平静地生活。(用hope that …翻译) We all hope that people will stop catching wild animals and let them live peacefully/in peace. 5 . If we pollute the environment more ， there will be fewer places for animals to live. 5. 用The ＋ adj.比较级… ， the ＋ adj.比较级…升格： The more we pollute the environment ， the fewer places there will be for animals to live. 6. Of course ， we need to take action to protect endangered animals. 6. 用There is no question that升格： There is no question that we need to take action to protect endangered animals. 7. With its black and white fur ， the panda is special as one of the most lovely animals. 7. 用stand out升格： With its black and white fur ， the panda stands out as one of the most lovely animals. 8. Every small a ... ...
