人教版高中英语必修第三册UNIT5 The Value of Money Section Ⅳ 写作指导课件+练习 含答案与解析（教师用）

(课件网) UNIT 5　THE VALUE OF MONEY Section Ⅳ　写作指导 演练佳作 Write a play with the following notes. Henry Goes to the Barber's Henry was walking along the street when he saw a barber's shop.The barber ignored him at first.Henry waited for a long time.Henry was treated in a cold way and after the haircut，Henry showed the barber the bank note instead of giving him money.The barber was shocked and treated Henry patiently and politely.He invited Henry to come often. 写作步骤 一、审题谋篇 写作要求是写一幕戏剧。写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定文体(genre)：这是一幕戏剧(play)。写作时注意戏剧的写作特点。 2．主体时态(tense)：文章应以一般现在时态为主。 3．主体人称(person)：由于是戏剧，对话居多，所以人称应该以第一或第二人称(first/second person)为主。 4．谋篇 Part 1：Before showing the note (Henry was looked down upon) Part 2：While showing the note (The barber was shocked) Part 3：After showing the note (Henry was treated politely) 二、要点陈述 1．忽视了Henry，理发师继续给另一位顾客理发。这名顾客来得比Henry晚。 _____，the barber continues to cut hair for another customer.The customer came later than Henry. 2．(以一种粗鲁的方式)你以为我看不见吗？事实上，我能看见。 (_____) Do you mean I can't see it Indeed，I can see it. 3．(犹豫了一会儿)我能推迟付款吗？我身上没有零钱。 (hesitating for a moment) _____？I don't have any change on me. Ignoring Henry in a rude manner Can I postpone paying money for it 4．(皱着眉头看他)你本应该一开始就告诉我你没钱的。如果那样的话，我就不会在你身上浪费那么多时间。 (looking at him with a frown) You _____ from the beginning that you didn't have the money._____，I wouldn't have wasted so much time on you. ought to/should have told me In that case 5．(震惊的)我从来没想过我能亲眼看到，亲手摸到它。如果我知道您这么富有，我就不会那样对待您了。 (shocked) _____ with my own eyes and touch it with my own hands.If I had known that you are so rich，I wouldn't have treated you like that. 6．您介意在这里多待一会儿，以便我为您设计一个独特的发型吗？ _____ so that I can design a special haircut for you I had never thought I could see it Would you mind staying here any longer 7．(看着一位新顾客)新的顾客来了，我得走了。一个月以后我再付钱。 (looking at a new customer) _____ ____.I will pay for it in a month. 8．(带着大大的笑容)不要紧，您想什么时候付钱都行。欢迎常来，我愿意随时为您服务！ (wearing a big smile) It doesn't matter at all and you can pay for it whenever you'd like to pay for it.Welcome to my shop as often as possible and _____.Anytime! A new customer comes here and I have to go I am willing to serve you 三、句式升级 1．用定语从句升级句1。 Ignoring Henry，the barber continues to cut hair for another customer who came later than Henry.　 2．把句7升级为全部倒装句型。 (looking at a new customer) Here comes a new customer and I have to go.I will pay for it in a month. 3．把句8升级为省略句。 (wearing a big smile) It doesn't matter at all and you can pay for it whenever you'd like to.Welcom ... ...