读后续写 重点句式合集以及情节构造思路详解 在读后续写这道题中，让句子写出画面感是极为重要的。具体怎么构建画面感呢？ 1.在描写某个人物动作时，可以把该人物的动作拆分成几个细化的动作，并加上情绪。 sb did A, did B, and did C eyes glistening/radiating/shedding with 情名 doing A , sb did B and did C uncontainable 情名spreading across sb's face Having done A, sb did B and did C 情名 overwhelming/surrounding/seizing sb Aiming to do, sb did B and did C Plams sweating；throat tighting；heart beating At the thought/sight/sound of, sb did A ...... face turning pale；trembling；shivering with the scene/words of...lingering/ emerging in one's mind clenching fist；fixing eyes on； 若某个句子需要着重描写情绪的转变，可适当地给它加上情绪产生的原因、引发的结果 A wave of 情名 welled up and surged through sb exerted every effort to maintain compoure... Overwhelmed/surrounded/seized by sb forced.... to consider the .... deliberately What made sb 情绪 形容词 was that ＋原因 sb embarked on doing....instantly So情形 did sb feel that ＋结果 sb determined to do adj/adv as sb was/ did, sb ....＋结果 sb made up his mind to do Instead of feeling overwhelmed by... A wave of ... welled up and surged through 描写续写的结尾时，有多种写法: 1.感叹句结尾：用于主人公经历了挫折、困难、麻烦、挑战后获得的感悟。 What a/an unforgettable/ precious/ invaluable experience/encounter/memory sb had /got！ It was then that I realized how precious and invaluable that honesty and kindness could be. Only then did it dawn on me that ..... . 2.回望发生的事情。用于事件给主人公留下极其深刻的印象 Looking back on the experience，I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying“.....” 定格画面 位于... 做着....，I realized that...... 如故事写爬山，爬山途中经历了困难，但最终登上了山顶。 结尾就可以描述主人公站在山顶上，不仅成功登顶，而且体会到了不放弃精神带来的成就感。 范文一： Majestic Road Hill on the outskirts of our city is very steep in places, and if you stop pedaling, the bike immediately stops and starts rolling backwards. The uphill climb is long, and it is difficult for one person to climb to the top. Thirty of us are from the same class. We did a dirt bike tour that day. Once we reached the top, there were two flat spots: a burger at Dairy Queen and a homemade doughnut (a small cake) at Becker's. The agreement is simple: the first person to reach the top of the mountain, the rest of us will pay for his meal. Ed and I walked ahead of the whole team. To reach the top, we climbed the steepest hill. Ed was ahead of me, and he eventually reached the top of the mountain. Then look at me and cheer. "Kevin, come on!" I gave it a try. When I was nine feet away from Ed, something went wrong. My leg started cramping. I was standing on the bike and couldn't pedal or move forward. I'm about to lose my balance. Just at the critical moment, Ed jumped down from the top and gave me a helping hand. Ed and I cheered for them while they were struggling to ride towards the top. 写前分析：作者和同班同学去爬城市郊区 ... ...
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