2025届考生必备中考英语热点话题写作指导学案 Lesson 1郊游类（户外实践类）

/ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科 Writing Lesson 1 户外实践类 假设你是李华，5 月 20 日（周日）参加了学校组织的 “生态农场实践日” 活动。请以 “A Memorable School Trip” 为题，写一篇英文日记，内容可以包含但不仅限于：参与人员与集合细节、交通方式与农场环境描写、具体劳动实践与团队活动、个人感悟与环保主题关联。 一．审题要点 人称：第一人称（I/we） 时态：一般过去时（核心）+ 现在完成时（感悟升华） 新增得分点：环境描写（如农场生态细节）、劳动教育（如农业知识应用）、环保理念（如可持续发展） 字数控制：80-100 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 二、提纲优化与细节拓展 段落 内容 细节/亮点 第一段 （背景引入） 集合时间、地点、人员、交通 增加天气描写（如 “sunny with a gentle breeze”） 使用 “gather at the school gate promptly” 体现守时意识 第二段 （活动主体） 农场劳动 + 团队协作活动 劳动细节：“pick organic strawberries”“learn to plant seedlings” 团队活动：“hold a picnic with self-picked vegetables” 环境描写：“butterflies flying among the crops” 第三段 （感悟升华） 个人感受 + 环保 / 劳动教育主题 升华句：“realize the importance of sustainable farming” 关联中考热点：“cherish food and protect the environment” 三、遣词造句升级（附中考高频表达） 基础句型 升级句型（高分句型） 句式解析 We went to the farm by bike. We cycled to the Eco-Farm, enjoying the fresh air along the way. 用 “cycled” 替代 “went by bike”，更显生动；增加伴随状语提升句式丰富度 We helped farmers pick vegetables. Under the farmers’ guidance, we carefully picked organic tomatoes and learned about crop rotation. 加入 “under guidance” 体现学习过程；“crop rotation”（轮作）为农业相关高级词汇 We had a good time. Not only did we gain hands-on experience, but also deepened our understanding of eco-friendly agriculture. 使用 “not only...but also...” 倒装句；“hands-on experience”“eco-friendly” 为高分词汇 四、句型总结（新增中考高频句型） 1. 环境描写： The farm was covered with green crops, where birds sang and bees buzzed.（定语从句） A small stream ran through the fields, adding a touch of life to the peaceful scenery.（分词短语作状语） 劳动教育： It was the first time I had tried planting seeds, which made me appreciate the hard work behind every meal.（固定句型：It was the first time + 过去完成时） 环保升华： Only by protecting the land can we ensure a healthy environment for future generations.（倒装句：Only + 状语置于句首） 五、强化版填空训练-根据中文提示补全句子，注意使用升级表达： 1. The whole class _____ (7 点准时在校门口集合), with excitement shining in our eyes. 2. As we arrived at the Eco-Farm, _____ (蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞), and the smell of fresh soil greeted us. 3. We worked in groups to _____ (种植幼苗) and learned about _____ (可持续农业实践). 4. _____ (最难忘的部分是野餐), where we cooked dishes with the vegetables we had picked. 5. This trip has not only brought us joy but also _____ (增强了我们的环保意识). 答案示例： gathered at the school gate promptly at 7:00 a.m. butterflies were flying among the flowers plant seedlings; sustainable farming practices The most unforgettable ... ...