2025 年新高考全国一卷读后续写一文多写参考范文及范文解析

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 2025 年新高考全国一卷读后续写一文多写参考范文及范文解析 参考范文 情节构思 第一段（内心转变）：聚焦于 “我” 的内心反思，详细描写 “我” 如何认识到自己错误，愧疚感转化为 “必须去道歉” 的行动决心。 第二段（付诸行动与和解）：描绘和解场面，包括抵达时的紧张、真诚道歉、哥哥的反应，利用 Toby 的动作作为 “催化剂” 打破僵局，以象征和解的动作结尾。 参考范文一 P1 I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been utterly selfish and thoughtless. Blinded by concern for the baby, I failed my brother completely. I ignored his profound grief and loneliness, forgetting that Toby was his lifeline, his sole comfort, his constant companion – the one thing keeping him going in his fragile state. My brother needed understanding and support, not rejection. I was deeply ashamed of my behavior; I had acted with a lack of empathy. The weight of my guilt pressed down on me, consumed by remorse. P2 With the biscuits my wife had made, a peace offering, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I rang the bell. He opened the door, met with surprise, his expression guarded. His eyes held a mix of hurt and something else. “I was wrong, terribly wrong,” I said quickly. “I came to apologize sincerely. I failed to see things from your perspective. I completely disregarded what Toby means to you, especially now. I miss you, and I'm worried about you.” My brother sighed deeply, his expression softened slightly, and his eyes welled up. “Come in,” he said quietly, stepping aside to let me enter. He reached out and gave my shoulder a squeeze. The tension began to ease, finally broken by Toby's enthusiastic greeting. 参考范文二 P1 I realized it was me who was at fault. My own pride and my focus on a perfect house had blinded me to his pain. I had treated Toby, his only source of comfort, as a simple inconvenience. For my brother, who had already lost so much, my rigid rule must have felt like another rejection. A wave of shame washed over me. I couldn’t let my foolishness create a permanent distance between us. My wife agreed, saying it was time to apologize and make things right. P2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. Taking a deep breath, I knocked. When he opened it, his eyes showed surprise, followed by a familiar sadness. Before he could speak, I said, “I am so sorry. I was selfish and I hurt you.” He stood silently for a moment, his shoulders relaxing slightly. Just then, Toby pushed past his legs, swinging his tail and gently pushed his head against my hand, as if he’d already forgiven me. We sat down, talked, and laughed like old times. By the end of the visit, we’d agreed to have another gathering—this time, with Toby welcome inside, too. 二、参考范文一词块与长难句分析 （一）核心词块分类 情感表达类 愧疚感：was consumed by remorse（充满懊悔）、the weight of my guilt pressed down（负罪感沉重） 自责：utterly selfish and thoughtless（极其自私欠考虑）、deeply ash ... ...