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课件网) Topic：A travel experience He who travels far knows more. 远行者见识广。 Writing 【学习目标】 能初步了解写作过程———审与列、扩与连、查与抄” 初中生活即将结束，很多同学想在考试后去旅游。请你以 “An unforgettable trip ”为题，用英语写一篇短文与同学们分享一次旅行经历，帮助同学们更好地选择旅游地。 内容包括：1. 你对旅游地的总体印象； 2. 旅游中的活动； 3. 你的感受与评价； 4. …… （可写你对他人的建议） 要求：1. 短文必须涵盖以上内容，可适当拓展； 2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； 3. 词数100词左右。 审 Writing topic（话题）： person（人称）： tense(时态)： key points(要点): An unforgettable trip first person simple past tense (一般过去时) genaral impression activities feelings and advice 列 Make an Outline（提纲） key points Your outline can be like this. General impression（总体印象）: 1. place _____, time _____, people _____, ... 2. impression: _____ Activities（活动）: 1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. … Feelings and advice（感受与建议）: _____ An outline can help you cover all the points(涵盖所有要点). 采分点1: 内容充实，覆盖要点（7分） Hainan 2024 family fantastic visit Tianyahaijiao watch the sunrise collect shells on the beach unforgettable, pay a visit to… An unforgettable trip Beginning Body Ending Let’s go for it! General impression（总体印象）: 1. place _____, time _____, people _____, ... 2. impression: _____ Make your outline an article! Hainan 2024 family fantastic Let’s go for it! Hainan is a magic land of flowers, coconut trees and the sea world. I went there with my family in 2013. It was so fantastic that I will never forget it. 扩 采分点2: 用词贴切，语法正确，句型多样（7分） 连 采分点3: 结构紧凑，意思连贯（4分） Beginning An unforgettable trip I enjoyed watching the sunrise on the seaside. I had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches. I also visited Tianyahaijiao. I had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches, which made me happy and relaxed. I had a lot of unforgettable memories there. For example, Besides, What’s more, It was the most beautiful sight that I have ever seen. No visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao. An unforgettable trip Activities（活动）: 1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. … watch the sunrise collect shells on the beach Body 扩与连 visit Tianyahaijiao I had a lot of unforgettable memories there. For example,we enjoyed watching the sunrise on the seaside. It was the most beautiful sight that I have ever seen. Besides, we had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches, which made me relaxed and happy. What’s more, we also visited Tianyahaijiao. It is thought that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao. An unforgettable trip Activities（活动）: 1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. … watch the sunrise collect shells on the beach Body 扩与连 visit Tianyahaijiao topic sentence（主题句） 1+1策略:feelings, details, others… Different sentence patterns句型多样 采分点2: 用词贴切，语法正确，句型多样（7分） 采 ... ...
