Section Ⅵ Writing———电子邮件 [语料积累] 1.首段:开门见山,说明写信的目的 ①I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit. 很高兴得知你将来中国游览。 ②I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 我写这封信是为了感谢我在美国时你对我的帮助。 ③I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。 2.主体:详细介绍邮件内容 ①To be honest, the campus of my new school is the most beautiful one that I have ever stayed. 说实话,我的新学校的校园是我待过的最漂亮的一个。 ② I recommend this club to you for the following reasons. 我向您推荐这家俱乐部的原因如下。 ③First, Peking Opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art. 首先,京剧是中国传统艺术中的一颗明珠。 ④Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking Opera make-ups. 此外,俱乐部还将定期组织各种活动,比如邀请著名演员表演,以及绘制京剧妆容等。 3.尾段:结尾并祝福 ①I'm looking forward to hearing from you. 期待您的回信。 ②I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 如果您能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。 ③I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 [典题示例] 假设你是李华,刚上高中两周多,请你按照以下内容给你的英国笔友Tom发一封电子邮件,简单介绍你的学校、老师和自己的情况: 1.我的新学校是一所历史悠久的名校,有50个班,2 500多名学生; 2.老师对我们很友好,教学方法与初中截然不同,上课方式很有趣; 3.课程比初中更有挑战性,但有信心学好; 4.与同学相处非常融洽,积极参加各种课外活动。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 1.审题谋篇 第一段:点出写信目的:介绍自己学校的情况; 第二段:具体介绍新学校、老师和自己的情况; 第三段:表达希望。 2.要点翻译 ①我的新学校是一所历史悠久的名校。 My new school is famous and has a long history. ②它是我们的初中学校的三倍大。 It is three times bigger than our junior secondary school. ③我的学校有50个班和2 500多名学生。 There are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school. ④我们老师的教学方法很有趣,与我们以前老师的教学方法截然不同。 Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous teachers. ⑤虽然我们学的课程更有挑战性,但我有信心学好它们。 Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm sure that I can learn them well. ⑥我与同学相处非常融洽,积极参加各种课外活动。 I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities. 3.词句升级 (1)用非限制性定语从句升级句①和句② My new school,which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history. (2)用confident升级句⑤ Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm confident that I can learn them well. (3)用various升级句⑥ I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities. 4.连句成篇 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I'm writing to tell you something about my new school. My new school, which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is ... ...
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