Section Ⅵ Writing———记叙文 [语料积累] 1.首段:介绍故事背景 ①Last week,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. 上周,我帮助外祖父母为北戴河的旅行做准备。 ②Last Sunday,an old lady aged about seventy was badly hurt in a traffic accident at the second crossing of Xinhua Road. 上周日,一位大约七十岁的老奶奶在新华路的第二个路口的一次交通事故中严重受伤。 2.主体:故事的发展与结局 ①Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise. 昨天晚上,我正忙着为考试做准备突然听到很大的噪音。 ②On my way home,I came across an old friend of mine. 在回家的路上,我遇到了一位老朋友。 ③The sun was shining and the birds were singing. 阳光明媚,鸟儿在歌唱。 3.尾段:故事的启示与评论 ①Tired as we were,we still felt quite happy. 尽管很累,但是我们仍然感到很高兴。 ②I learned from the experience that honesty always comes first. 从这次经历中我学会了诚实是最重要的。 [典题示例] 5月1日,你和你们班的志愿者去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动。请按下列要点用英语写一篇短文。 时间 5月1日 地点 阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home) 活动过程 1.到达时受到欢迎 2.赠送鲜花和水果 3.帮助老人打扫卫生 4.坐在院子里与老人聊天 老人们 的反应 激动并感谢,并说这一天将是他们永远会记住的美好一天 感受 很高兴,因为…… 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 1.审题谋篇 第一段:事件背景; 第二段:事件过程; 第三段:个人感受。 2.要点翻译 ①5月1日,我和我的同学去阳光敬老院做志愿者工作。 On May 1,my classmates and I went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. ②一到达,我们就受到了热烈欢迎,我们赠送给老人们鲜花和水果。 On arrival,we were warmly welcomed,and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. ③打扫完房子后,我们坐在院子里和老人开心地聊天。 After we cleaned the house,we sat in the yard and chatted with the elderly people happily. ④老人们对我们的善意很感激,他们说这是如此美好的一天,他们将永远记住它。 The elderly were grateful and thankful for our kindness,saying it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. ⑤我们很高兴因为我们所做的事情给别人带来了快乐,也丰富了我们的生活。 We are very happy because what we did has brought joy to others and enriched our own lives. 3.词句升级 (1)用时间状语从句升级句② As soon as we arrived,we were warmly welcomed,and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. (2)用动词-ing 形式升级句③ After cleaning the house, we sat in the yard,chatting with the elderly people happily. (3)用not only...but also...升级句⑤ We are very happy because what we did has not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives. 4.连句成篇 【参考范文】 On May 1, my classmates and I went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. As soon as we arrived,we were warmly welcomed, and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.After cleaning the house,we sat in the yard, chatting with the elderly people happily.The elderly were grateful and thankful for our kindness, saying it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. In a word,we are very happy ... ...
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