译林版高中英语必修第一册Unit 3 Getting along with others Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——交友日记学案
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Section Ⅲ Integrated skills———交友日记 [文体感知] 日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所思为内容的一种文体。写英语日记一般要注意以下几点: 1.规范的格式:英语日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文。书端用于记载写日记的日期、星期和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行,顶格写起。日期和星期写在第一行的左上角,天气情况写在第一行的右上角。 2.正确的人称:日记是对生活的记录,是把自己一天中最有意义的事情记录下来所形成的书面材料,故写日记多用第一人称。 3.正确的时态:日记一般记叙当天发生的事,因此多用一般过去时态。但如谈论个人感悟或说明客观事实、普遍真理时,可用现在时态。 [写作素材] 1.Today is a sunny day.I went camping with my good friend Peter. 今天阳光明媚。我和我的好友彼得去露营了。 2.It is normal for teenagers to have some conflicts among them. 青少年之间有一些冲突是正常的。 3.I hope my friend is humorous and fun. 我希望我的朋友幽默又有趣。 4.He is selfless and we all highly respect him. 他是无私的,我们都很尊敬他。 5.I owe him a lot for everything he has done for me. 我非常感谢他为我所做的一切。 6.What happened today has left a deep impression on my memory. 今天发生的事在我的脑海里留下了很深的印象。 7.Everyone who knows him likes to make friends with him. 每个认识他的人都乐意与他交朋友。 8.In my opinion,he is a kind-hearted,humorous and responsible teacher. 在我看来,他是一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。 9.Thanks to his help,I have made much progress and caught up with others. 多亏他的帮助,我取得了很大进步并赶上了其他同学。 [典题示例] 假定你是李华,你和好朋友Jenny因为一次误会影响了你们之间的友谊。请你写一篇日记,倾诉自己的苦恼,并说出你的打算。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Saturday,2 October Sunny Dear Diary, 第一步 学会审题谋篇 写作类型 日记 人称时态 以第一、三人称为主,以一般现在时为主 写作要点 1.诉说失去好朋友的苦恼; 2.剖析原因及个人打算; 3.抒发对未来和Jenny友谊的信心。 第二步 保基础分———会写基本句 1.我担心失去我的好朋友珍妮。 I am worried about losing my good friend Jenny. 2.我希望我们能消除我们之间的误解。 I hope we can smooth out the misunderstanding between us. 3.老实说,这些天我一直在反思自己的行为。 To be honest,I have been reflecting on my behaviour these days. 4.即使是最好的朋友发生冲突也是正常的。 It is normal for even best friends to have a conflict. 5.我必须尽快和她和好。 I must make up with her as soon as possible. 6.我会和她进行一次真诚的交谈。 I will have a sincere talk with her. 7.我们就能更好地了解彼此。 We can have a better understanding of each other. 8.我相信我们的友谊会比以往任何时候都更加牢固。 I believe our friendship will grow stronger than ever. 第三步 创设亮点———试写高级句 9.将句4和句5合并为含有though引导的主从复合句。 Though it is normal for even best friends to have a conflict,I must make up with her as soon as possible. 10.用so that连接句6和句7 I will have a sincere talk with her so that we can have a better understanding of each other. 第四步 衔接成篇得高分 Saturday,2 October Sunny Dear Diary, [参考范文] I am worried about losing my good fri ... ...