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课件网) Key question What is it like to travel in space Unit 5 Off to space Writing Writing Writing d c b a Step 1 Discuss the content of your post in groups. It should include four parts: where you want to go, how it will feel to be in space, what you want to do, and what you hope the trip will be like. Use the mind map in Exercise 1 to help you. Step 2 Use the key words from the mind map to write complete sentences. Step 3 Read the post on page 76 and analyse its structure. Pay attention to transition words like first, when, after that and next. Step 4 Write your post. Follow the example on page 76. 问题 是 否 如果为否,如何改进 1. 你在短文中是否包含了梦想的太空旅行的所有信息？ 2. 你在短文中是否用了本单元的语法———一般将来时？ 3. 你在短文中是否运用了本单元中学到的单词和短语？ 4. 你的短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确？ Step 5 Check your writing and complete the chart, and then revise it. Step 6 Work in pairs or groups. Give scores to your partner’s or group members’ writing. 评价指标 得分 评分标准 1. 短文是否包含了梦想的太空旅行的所有信息？ 5= Excellent 4= Good 3= Acceptable 2= Needs improvement 2. 短文是否有清晰的开头和结尾？ 3. 短文各段是否有足够的细节支撑？ 4. 短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词汇？ 5. 短文的拼写、语法和标点是否正确？ Homework 基础作业 在小组内互读作文，用互评表互评作文，选出本组优秀作文。 拓展作业 把自己作文制作成网帖，可以适当配上插图。 dream /dri:m/ v. 想象；梦想 She always dreamt of becoming a scientist at the Space Centre. n. 梦想；理想 My dream is to become an astronaut one day. chance /tSA:ns/ n. 机会；机遇 I’m so happy I had the chance to meet a real astronaut. send /send/ v. 邮寄；发送 She sent the letter by airmail. introduction /0IntrR9dVkSn/ n. 序言；引言 It is always a good idea to plan your introduction before you start writing. view /vju:/ n. 景色，风景 I’d like a room with a view. someday /9sVmdeI/ adv. 总有一天；有朝一日 She hopes to become a writer someday. experience /Ik9spIRriRns/ n. 经历；阅历 The experience of travelling through space must be amazing.
