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课件网) Nowadays teenagers spend a lot of time on the internet. What are the positive and negative effects of the internet on their lives Write a paragraph to express your opinions. Brainstorm Writing your opinions about the internet Pre-writing Opinions and examples Opinion Example The internet helps us develop our interests. I love reading science fiction novels, and I post my book reviews online. Take ... as an example For example, ... Another example is ... From my personal experience, ... Pre-writing A "seesaw structure" Positive effects + examples Negative effects + examples On one hand ... On the other hand ... However ... Pre-writing Evaluation Criteria Score Guidelines 1. I expressed both positive and negative opinions about the internet clearly. 5=Excellent 4=Good 3=Acceptable 2=Needs Improvement 2. I supported my opinions with specific examples. 3. I used transitional words appropriately. 4. I used varied language. 5. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. While-writing Write down your opinions and support them with examples. Post-writing Check your partner’s writing, and then revise your own writing. Evaluation Criteria If your answer is NO, write down your suggestions. 1. Does the writing include both positive and negative opinions about the internet 2. Is each opinion supported by specific examples 3. Did he / she use transitional words appropriately 4. Did he / she use varied language 5. Did he / she use correct spelling, grammar and punctuation Homework 基础作业 依据互评表及自评表，进一步完善课堂上的写作内容。 拓展作业 采访家庭成员，了解互联网对他们生活的影响，并根据课上所学，完成一篇议论文。 positive /9pBzRtIv/ adj. 正面的；积极的 We should always try to have a positive attitude towards life. negative /9neGRtIv/ adj. 消极的 Don’t be so negative about everything. effect /I9fekt/ n. 影响 Parents’ behaviour can have a great effect on their children. opinion /R9pInjRn/ n. 意见；看法 What’s your opinion on this problem novel /9nBvl/ n.（长篇）小说 I like reading novels in my free time. comment /9kBment/ n. 评论 Please leave some comments on this article. stay in touch with 与……保持联系 Even after graduation, we can stay in touch with our classmates through social media. THANK YOU
