【学霸笔记】13　UNIT 1　Period 6　课时学案 写作(Writing) 讲义 人教版高中必修一（教师版+学生版）

Period 6　 写作(Writing) 建议信 一、文体特征 建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来针对存在的某一问题提出自己的合理建议，从而达到解决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、有合理性和说服力。 二、语言特色 [基本框架] 开头：表明写信的目的； 主体：提出建议并阐述理由； 结尾：表达祝愿或期望。 [教材原句] (Ⅰ)Read the letter on Page 18 and find out the sentences that Susan Luo uses to describe problems． 1．I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible． 2．You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online． 3．But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life． (Ⅱ)Read the letter on Page 18 and find out the sentences that Susan Luo uses to offer advice． 1．I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour． 2．I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies． 3．Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend． [触类旁通] 1．建议信开头常用句式 ①Learning/Knowing that you have trouble in making friends，I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice． 得知你在交友方面有困难，我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。 ②I think you can make it if you follow the advice below． 如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会成功的。 2．表达建议常用句式 ①First(ly)，why not join a club If you do this，you can make friends． 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做的话，你就会交到朋友。 ②Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others．Then/That way，you will feel better． 其次，你应该尽力与别人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。 ③As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，you should help each other． 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。 ④How about joining a volunteer club so that you can improve your ability 参加志愿者俱乐部怎么样呀？这样的话，你能够提高你的能力。 3．建议信结尾常用句式 ①I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you． 我真希望我的建议对你有益。 ②I really hope you will find these suggestions useful． 我真希望你会觉得这些建议有用。 ③As time goes on，people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you if you can follow the above． 如果你遵从以上建议，那么随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。 假定你是李华，最近你收到了十四岁的学生徐婷的来信。她在信中说自己因为父母常年在外地工作而时常感到孤独。请你写信给她提供一些建议并说明原因。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题构思] [遣词造句] 1．你写信说你对现在的生活不满意，因为你的父母在另外一个城市工作。 You wrote that you are not content with your present life because your parents work in another city． 2．我非常理解你的困惑和焦虑。 I understand quite well that you are confused and anxious． 3．像你这样远离父母生活的青少年感到孤独是很正常的。 It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents． 4．我建议你去参加一个志愿者组织去帮助其他人。 I recommend you to join a volunteer organisation to help others． 5． ... ...