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课件网) 读后续写转场技巧 1 时间转场 About coherence and logic: 记叙体的顺序性：结构紧凑；一气呵成 意识流动顺序 时间顺序 空间顺序 场景的氛围 Now Katherine realized what had been going on. As Katherine took over the wet items from Hilda, Katherine sincerely apologized to Hilda for her misunderstanding and carelessness. Hilda’s eyes sparkling with thrill mingled（=mixed）with delight, she proposed to Katherine that they could design a unique dolphin show to attract visitors-- Seeking Hidden Treasures Underwater. Hardly had Katherine taken her advice when she stored/ placed/ put/ hid all the original items behind the filter box. The next moment, showing a comb to Maya , Katherine issued a request,” Maya, please fetch a comb!”. Miraculously, the strategy worked ! Katherine and Hilda were both over the moon(=very happy) when Maya surfaced with a comb in her mouth. It didn’t take a long time before Maya turned into a star in the sea life park with her marvelous performance! 一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后 时间快 短语： 1.go fast/quickly 2. Time was ticking away (时间)一分一秒地过去 3. for/in an instant; in a spilt second; in a flash; in the blink of an eye; in a twinkling 刹那间 all of a sudden 突然; 4.Without (the slightest) hesitation; 5.in a flurry匆忙地；慌乱地 副词： 1.immediately/instantly /promptly立刻；马上 2.shortly /soon 不久，马上; 3. shortly after/before…在…之后/之前不久； 4.abruptly/suddenly突然 句型 1.on/upon (doing) sth 一做某事 2. before 还没来得及…就…，常见句式： Before sb knew what was happening, sth happened; Before sb realized/knew it, sth happened; it didn’t take long before sth happened不久就…; sth happened before sb could do sth 3. 刚一…就… 句式 ：The moment/instant +句子； no sooner had sth happened…than sth happened ..; hardly/scarcely had …when… Sentence-appreciation ◆Before I realized/knew it , my surfing days were over. ◆In a split second , thunder roared and lightning flashed and it began pouring. 霎时, 雷电交加,大雨倾盆。 ◆ Before I could finish my sentence, she burst into tears and began rocking back and forth. ◆ It didn’t take long before he recovered . ◆ The moment/instant he finished his speech in a magnetic voice, a storm of applause erupted from the audience. ◆No sooner had I been helped into my bathing-suit than I sprang out upon the warm sand and without thought of fear plunged into the cool water.刚换好游泳衣，我就冲向了温暖的沙滩，根本顾不得考虑海浪是大是小了。 学校举办运动会。同学们都很期待。运动会开始，第一项是跑步比赛。运动员们在起跑线准备，裁判（referee）鸣枪。运动员们冲出去，观众们欢呼。小明跑得很快，跑在前面。突然，他摔倒。大家很担心，有人跑过去帮忙。老师也赶紧过来，查看小明的情况。 The school held a sports meeting. The students were all looking forward to it. The sports meeting started, and the first event was the running race. The athletes were getting ready at the starting line, and then the referee fired the starting gun. ... ...
