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课件网) 选必一话题写作(人物介绍) 范文欣赏 Marie Curie, a pioneering scientist with a lifelong passion for research and discovery, impresses me most. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and remains the only person to have received Nobel Prizes in two different scientific fields. Whatever difficulties she came across in her whole life, never did she say no. Instead, through trial and error, she finally discovered radium. Her dedication to science and her fearless pursuit of knowledge have deeply influenced me, inspiring me to embrace curiosity, pursue academic excellence, and strive for meaningful contributions to the world. adj. 先驱的 pioneer n. 先锋 终身的 激情 n. 发现 vt. 使钦佩 倒装句 n. 试验 n. 错误 v. 发现 献身 无畏的 n. 追求 影响 v. 拥抱 n. 好奇 v. 追求 学术卓越 v. 力争;力求 n. 贡献 / pa n r / / re di m/镭 /p r su t/ / ded ke ( )n/ 写作要点 (一)人物简介的写作步骤 (概,貌,育,平,估) 1)age, sex, birth-place, background 2)appearance, character 3)education 4)big events in his or her life (in order of time) 5)evaluation 性别 外貌 性格 事件 评价 (二) 句式 概况(用同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺) 2. 亚伯拉罕·林肯出生于 1809 年 2 月 12 日,他的家庭贫困,出生在肯塔基州。 Abraham Lincoln, , was born in Kentucky on February 12th, 1809. 3. 查尔斯·狄更斯出身于一个贫穷的职员家庭,这位伟大的小说家几乎没有受过什么教育。 Born of a poor clerk’s family, Charles Dickens, , had little schooling. 4. 孙肖尔,一位跳水世界冠军,是来自广东的一名 14 岁男孩。 Sun Showier, , is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. the son of a poor family a great novelist a world champion in diving 概况 句型 Born in ..., 人物, 同位语(n./n.短语),主句 1. Born in 1930, Tu Youyou, a great scientist, devoted her life to medical research. 2. Born in 1912, Qian Xuesen, a renowned scientist, made outstanding contributions to China's aerospace industry. 外貌, 性格 (巧用with做定语) 1. 他是个近视/远视的家伙,鼻梁上架着一副眼镜。 He is near-sighted / far-sighted guy . 2. 她长着一头漂亮的长发,容貌出众/相貌平平/看起来有趣。 She is good-looking / ordinary-looking / funny-looking . 3. 他是个高高瘦瘦的小伙子,浓眉大眼,十分帅气。 He is a tall and thin guy , looking very handsome. 4. 爱因斯坦出生于德国,是一位想象力非凡的伟大科学家。 Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist . with a pair of glasses on his nose with long beautiful hair with thick eyebrows with an extraordinary imagination 描写人物的句式 1. Throughout his / her life, demonstrated incredible courage / determination / intelligence / leadership, which allowed him / her to accomplish / achieve great things. 在他/她的一生中,_____表现出了令人难以置信的勇气/决心/智慧/领导力,使他/她能够完成/取得伟大的成就。 非限制性定语从句 描写人物的成就 2._____ played a major role in event / movement by leading / fighting for / advocating for..., which ultimately led to _____. _____通过领导/为…而战/倡导在事件/运动中发挥了重要作用,最终导致了某结果。 非限制性定语从句 描写人物的意义 3. B ... ...