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课件网) 读 后 续 Continuation Writing 所 有 人 都 曾 是 小 孩 Le Petit Prince 写 者 所 有 人 都 曾 是 写 作 Le Petit Prince 王 子 何谓续写 what 如何续写 why 如何突破 how 何谓续写 读后续写的痛点 缺少训练 读后续写的痛点 缺乏语料 学生在面对续写无所适从 何谓续写 如何成就续写? 其实续写就是编故事 如何讲好一个故事? 其根本在于自我认知 自我认知 故事技能 将生活转化为更具有力量、更清晰、更有意义的体验的创作能力 文学技能 将日常语言转化为更高层次、更具有语言表达力、更生动描述的创造能力 自我认知 故事技能 将生活转化为更具有力量、更清晰、更有意义的体验的创作能力 文学技能 将日常语言转化为更高层次、更具有语言表达力、更生动描述的创造能力 故事的六要素 结构 structure 事件 event 场景 scene 幕 act 顺序sequence 节奏 rhythm 体现价值 情节设计方式 经典情节 ARCHPLOT 反情节 ANTIPLOT 小情节 MINIPLOT 因果逻辑 封闭结尾 线性时间 外部冲突 单一主角 现实视角 积极人物 开放结尾 内部冲突 多主角 消极人物 偶然巧合 非线性时间 非现实视角 自我认知 故事技能 将生活转化为更具有力量、更清晰、更有意义的体验的创作能力 文学技能 将日常语言转化为更高层次、更具有语言表达力、更生动描述的创造能力 考 场 作 文 如 铐 镣 戴 , 虽有限制,但你要跳得精彩。 者 舞 的 [2025新高考I卷]My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. 起因 场景1 场景2 A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was m ... ...