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课件网) 高三读后续写 句子扩写微技能训练 Learning Objectives 1 After this lesson, you will be able to…… summarize four techniques of sentence expasion by observing examples. 2 use the techniques to expand sentences and ultimately form a passage. 04 Summary and Assignment 03 Text Polishing 01 Sentence Expansion 02 Skills of Expansion CONTENTS A Simple “Story” I faced a challenge. I was nervous. How to make them more vivid These sentences lack detailed descriptions and are rather plain. I faced a challenge. I was nervous. An expansion adventure Expansion adventure With my heart pounding rapidly, I was extremely nervous, my hands trembling slightly.. Good! Sentence expansion Analysis Sentence expansion I faced a challenge. I was nervous. With my heart pounding rapidly, I was extremely nervous, my hands trembling slightly. analyze Sentence expansion With my heart pounding rapidly, I was extremely nervous, my hands trembling slightly. precise words psychological state rich details about actions Decompose actions Techniques Prepositional phrases or adverbs. Replace general verbs Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses. Expansion skills "I stepped forward slowly, my feet making soft thuds on the ground as I moved tentatively." "I walked" Expansion skills vividly describe Decompose actions Decompose actions. Techniques Prepositional phrases or adverbs. Replace general verbs. Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses. Expansion skills "She smiled brightly,her eyes twinkling with joy." Expansion skills Prepositional phrases or adverbs. Decompose actions. Techniques Prepositional phrases or adverbs. Replace general verbs. Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses. Expansion skills Replace general verbs with highly precise ones. Expansion skills “He looked” "He gazed intently" "He peered curiously" Decompose actions. Techniques Prepositional phrases or adverbs. Replace general verbs. Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses. Expansion skills Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses. "When I saw her, I was filled with joy." Expansion skills Text polishing entire story framework "I faced a challenge. I was nervous. I tried my best. I succeeded." Text polishing "I faced a challenge. I was nervous. I tried my best. I succeeded." Discuss fervently and utilize the expansion methods to bring this passage to life. Text polishing Group 3 Facing a tough challenge, I was overwhelmingly nervous, with my mind racing and my palms sweating. However, I summoned up my courage and made a determined effort. With perseverance and dedication, I finally succeeded, a sense of pride swelling in my heart. Summary and assignment four remarkable methods of sentence expansion employing various techniques using precise language adding details Summary and assignment Select a story beginning on the theme of people and society. Homework Apply the methods we've learned to ... ...
