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课件网) 读后续写 第二节 读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Lungs nearly bursting (爆裂), I struggled to lift my head out of the water. Inch by inch, my tired body reached for the end of the pool. The extent (程度) of my swimming career was purely recreational, while the competitive swimmers nearby thought nothing of the seemingly simple task of a 500-meter swim test. Pushing myself to finish what I had started, I could only think: why not take the easy way out Earlier that week, I had turned in my first job application at a local pool. Overqualified, I was hired on the spot. However, the tasks were boring: helping confused visitors and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide, those sorts of things. I was capable of more. So a swim test was required, establishing the mere fact that I was not completely helpless in a pool. Midway through, the manager administering the test remarked, “This looks really easy for you. Why aren't you applying to become a guard ” “The thought hadn't crossed my mind.” “Well, life guarding demands more responsibility, strength and respect. Thus the position pays $2 more per hour. Your swimming skills are strong enough. All you need to do is complete a certification class.” Inside I was unsure of myself, but his words inspired me-You never know what you are capable of until you force yourself to do it. Soon I passed the swim test. All left was to practice and learn first aid,CPR(心肺复苏),and procedures for different land and water-based emergencies. Work started soon. A well-intentioned yet anxious feeling in me soon passed. Days, weeks, and months went by without incident; emergencies were rare. The skills and training I had so carefully studied and acquired seemed unnecessary. Today appeared to be another uneventful day. However, shortly after the other guards signaled to the children to exit the pool, I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. _____ _____ Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. _____ _____ Extensive reading: Read for the basic elements of the story Basic Elements of a story Who (characters) When (time) Where (place) What (event) Why (reason) How (plot) (feelings, attitudes) I; manager today swimming pool Today appeared to be another uneventful day. One boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up. Something must have gone wrong with the boy I was ready to give first aid to the boy. the boy Beginning Climax Ending Inciting incident Falling action Read for the plot and emotion Character: who Setting: when, where Plot: what, how, why What makes a story: 5Ws+1H Intensive reading Rising action Beginning Climax Ending I decided to apply to become a g ... ...