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课件网) 旅行日记 微写作 Writing When it comes to travelling, what words come to your mind Travelling Brainstorming Words related to travelling by plane/air,ferry, highway, luggage, money, scenery, souvenir,activity relax, impressive,wonderful,unforgettable，fantastic,comfortable,broaden horizon,increase knowledge tansportation: preparations: destinations: purpose and feelings: Text 1 (写作任务) 假如你是Mrs Xie,去年Mrs Xie和丈夫去了上海三日游。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇游记。 行程 活动内容 第一天 参观东方明珠塔及外滩;乘观光游轮夜游黄浦江。 第二天 游览上海迪士尼主题乐园。 第三天 市内游玩;购物。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 东方明珠塔the Oriental Pearl Tower 外滩the Bund 游轮 ship 迪士尼乐园Disneyland Pre-writing: Firstly , pay attention to the three factors of a composition. (1) Past tenses（did） (2) The first-person composition(I/we) (3) Structure 去年Mrs Xie和丈夫去了上海三日游。 行程 活动内容 第一天 参观东方明珠塔及外滩;乘观光游轮夜游黄浦江。 第二天 游览上海迪士尼主题乐园。 第三天 市内游玩;购物。 Last year my husband and I visited Shanghai by plane.We stayed there for three days. Last year my husband and I visited Shanghai by plane.We stayed there for three days. when who where how Para.1: 简述旅行概况(Mrs Xie参加了上海三日游活动); 去年Mrs Xie和丈夫去了上海三日游。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇游记。 行程 活动内容 第一天 参观东方明珠塔及外滩;乘观光游轮夜游黄浦江。 第二天 游览上海迪士尼主题乐园。 第三天 市内游玩;购物。 The first day,we went straight to visit the Oriental Pearl Tower.Then,we went to the Bund. Finally, we enjoyed the beautiful night sceneries of Huangpu River on a ship. the Oriental Pearl Tower the Bund the Bund on a ship 行程 活动内容 第一天 参观东方明珠塔及外滩;乘观光游轮夜游黄浦江。 第二天 游览上海迪士尼主题乐园。 第三天 市内游玩;购物。 The next day, we visited Shanghai Disneyland and spent a happy day. 行程 活动内容 第一天 参观东方明珠塔及外滩;乘观光游轮夜游黄浦江。 第二天 游览上海迪士尼主题乐园。 第三天 市内游玩;购物。 On the third day, we were showed around the streets and did some shopping. Last year my husband and I visited Shanghai by plane.We stayed there for three days. The first day, we went straight to visit the Oriental Pearl Tower. Then, we went to the Bund. Finally, we enjoyed the beautiful night scenes of Huangpu River on a ship. The next day, we visited Shanghai Disneyland and spent a happy day. On the third day, we were showed around the streets and did some shopping. Last year my husband and I made a three -day tour of Shanghai by plane.That was my first to Shanghai. As soon as our plane reached Shanghai/ On our flight’s arrival, After lunch, There we saw many different style buildings./ we were impressed by a wide variety of buildings. After supper we admired the fascinating night scenes of Huangpu River from a ship. On the third day, we went on a sightseeing tour of the streets and bought some souvenir gifts. ,taking part ... ...
