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课件网) 细节魔法师———6招让应用文从干瘪到满分！ 恰当添加 锦上添花 根据高考英语作文的评分标准, 作文被分成了五个档次.其中分数较高的档次对于考生作文的要求都涉及了覆盖所有内容要点、使用较多语法结构和词汇、有效使用语句间的连接成分.其实, 还有一个重要的方面,那就是在作文中要注意细节的适当增加。 列举具体的实例进行补充说明 MAGIC 增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容 细节魔法师 1 3 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 2 4 结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、希望、愿景、倡议等 5 加谚语 5 6 01 列举具体的实例 进行补充说明 PART Chinese traditional culture is various, . 1.中国传统文化是多样化的。 such as Peking Opera,Han costumes and Tang Poetry such as, for example, .....and so on. 2.I like reading books, . . 3.我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 I'll spend some time staying with my parents, . such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers. chatting with them and doing some housework. 4.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. . . . For example, we can use recyclable bags, plant more trees and save water and energy. 02 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 PART 1.知道你的英国朋友在中国不知如何学好中文。 I to know that you do not how to learn Chinese well. 2.邀请你的英国朋友参加音乐节。 I am tell you that a Music Festival will be held in our school. 3.同学们去买零食。 The classmates go to buy some snacks. Many classmates to buy some snacks. am quite sorry so glad to ran as quickly as possible 在邀请信,请求建议或请求帮助的文体中,在提出主题前,先背景渲染. It is said that you are interested in........ I know you are good at.... It is believed that you are warm-hearted and ..... I am more than delighted to hear that you are dying to…… 03 增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容 PART 时间:Monday. Friday. Sunday. March. April.May.December. from 9a.m to 11a.m / last 3 hours 地点:the school hall, library. the meeting room. the school gate. the shop. the playground. 1.同学们去买零食 ,many classmates ran as quickly as possible to buy some snacks. 2.你校计划举一个主题班会 Our school is planning to hold a class meeting. after class/school to the shop Our school is planning to hold a class meeting . in the school hall on May 4th. 04 适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 PART 1.留言条：我们的见面取消 。 I am sorry to tell you that I couldn’t meet you . I am sorry to tell you that I couldn’t meet you at the library tomorrow as I have something important to deal with. 地点&时间 原因 I am sorry to tell you that I couldn’t meet you at the library tomorrow There are several reasons for this. The reason for…is that… The reasons are as follows. The reason why… is that 2.感谢给予如何学习英语建议。 Thank you for your advice on how to learn English. 结果 Thank you for your advice on how to learn English.Recently, I have made great progress in English and my teacher ... ...
