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课件网) Continuation Writing Content Language What difficulties are you faced with in continuation writing 评分时，应主要从内容、词汇和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为： （1）续写内容的完整性,以及与原文情境的融洽度； （2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 （3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性； What makes a good continuation writing Assessment Criteria coherent (well connected) accurate / rich / vivid logical and reasonable Step1 Analyze the story How to plot Analysis of Teac ho W hen W hat W Read for the elements and main idea The feeling of the main character. Beginning Climax Ending Para1: Maria knew her neighbor, Mrs. Hernandez 's routine and they are good friends. Para2: Maria did not see Mrs. Hernandez as usual Para3: Maria told that to her family. Para4: The next Moring, Maria still didn’t see Mrs. Hernandez. Para1: Maria’s mother agreed to go with worried daughter to their neighbor's house worried friendly a little worried more worried 1. Read for the plot & emotional change Para2: Then, Maria and her mother waited there anxiously. Main idea of the story a（ n ） _____, _____,school girl MMM Maria Mrs. Hernandez a _____neighbor neighbor &good friends 2.Read for Characters always enjoy their small talks and specially-made cookies from her neighbor. Always smiled and stopped to chat, and gave Maira a box of her specially-made cookies with a note . warm-hearted caring kind Question : Why did Mrs. Hernandez and her dog fail to show up at the regular time Step1 Analyze the story Step2 Frame your essay with 2 given sentences How to plot Para.1: Maria’s mother agreed to go with her worried daughter to their neighbor’s house. ① How did Maria make sure whether Mrs. Hernandez was at home or not ② How was Mrs. Hernandez and her dog What happened to them ③ what did Maria and her mother do Para.2: Then, Maria and her mother waited there anxiously. Moments later, some doctors arrived in an ambulance. ①What did the doctors do ②What did the doctors say ③What’s the reaction of Maria 、 her mother and the neighbor ④ The ending. (They phoned the hospital) (details) knock the door but nobody anwsered (maybe something terrible happened to her) (expressing her concern for Mrs. Hernandez) any details can be reused to the text Since Mrs. Hernandez was asleep, Maria left her some cookies with a note that read: “To my good friend Mrs. Hernandez: Feel better, I’ll look after Marisol, and I miss you—Maria.” Coherence By writing the article, the writer intends to _____ describe a terrible experience of Mrs. Hernandez highlight an act of kindness and the friendship between neighbors It's wise and necessary to share a story with a bright and positive theme. 3. Read for the theme the theme Principle: Positive 1. Care is just like the quilt( 被子) in the cold night that can give warmth. 2. People come to their neighbors in trouble. 人到难处邻里来。 3. Love and kindness can work wonders. Continuat ... ...
