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课件网) 外研社2019版 高二英语 独立主格让你的描写跃然纸上 How to give a vivid account with the help of absolute construction ① Absolute construction What is absolute construction How can it make the account more vividly ① ② Jenny reporter of the campus magazine 潘展乐 2024 Paris Olympics 08:00 王老师 邀请你语音通话 潘展乐 2024 Paris Olympics 08:00 王老师 连接中... 潘展乐 2024 Paris Olympics Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring. Soon he became first to reach the finishing line ... 王老师 Hi! Jenny, I have read your article. And I like it. Thank you, Mr. Wang. But I think it would be better with more details. More details Mr. Wang, could you please give me an example You can describe how Pan’s arms and legs move. What a good idea! Thx. First draft Second draft Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring. His arms pushed forward with great strength. His legs hit the water hard. 王老师 Wonderful! Jenny. It is more vivid. We are going to polish it further. Ok, Mr Wang. I believe the three sentences can be combined into one. Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring. His arms pushed forward with great strength. His legs hit the water hard. It would be more concise. I will try my best. Second draft Third draft Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when His arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. Third draft 王老师 Wow, Jenny, you really did it well. Thank you, Mr Wang. But I think it would be better to combine them with absolute construction (独立主格). Don’t worry. Let me show you. Excuse me What is absolute construction (独立主格) And how does it work Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when His arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. Fourth draft （独立主格） Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. Fourth draft （独立主格） Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. Fourth draft （独立主格） Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. 谓语改成非谓语 Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushing forward with great strength. and his legs hitting the water hard. Fourth draft （独立主格） 我懂了！删掉连词，用非谓语。 准确说，是独立主格 Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, his arms pushing forward with great strength. his legs hitting the water hard. Pan Zhanle ... ...
