(
课件网) Continuation writing （11） 捕捉伏笔，续写照应（有伏必应） （与妈妈共度美食节） Detective Game: Where is Mr. Dinosaur Writer Anton Chekhov(契科夫) famously said, “If in the first act(第一幕) you have hung a pistol(手枪) on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired.” _____— Foreshadowing It is fired.— _____ A pistol on the wall Echoing 理论依据： 契科夫之枪 foreshadowing伏笔是文学创作中描写、叙述的一种手法，指作者对将要在作品中出现的人物或事件，预作提示或暗示，以求前后呼应。这种手法有助于全文达到结构严谨、情节发展合理的效果，其最显著的特征是有伏必应。 echo照应是文学创作中描写、叙述的一种手法，指作品下文与上文相呼应，即“回应上文”。好的伏笔与照应能起到暗示、点题、沟通文章内部联系等作用，使文理通顺，合情合理，往往能让人产生心灵共鸣或意外的阅读惊喜。 What is “echo the foreshadowing” 寻找伏笔，为照应打下基础 (1)留意人物的语言、动作、神态、外貌和心理等细节描写。 (2)留意文中反复出现或重点描写的特定物品。 (3)留意文中对续写部分有推动或暗示作用的环境描写。 (4) 关注文章的主题。 (5) 关注人物的情感的变化。 识别伏笔 通常指在故事中关键时刻出现的人物，他们的行为或出现对故事情节产生重要影响。 不仅在情节上起到关键作用，比如帮助主人公解决难题、推动故事发展等，还在情感上与读者产生共鸣，使故事更具感染力。 1. 人物伏笔（贵人） 特征：“四有新人” 有名字 有身份 有特写 有发言 In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler took a week off from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route to climb Mount Doggie Dowler. His wife Jenifer didn't like her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler's going on adventures by himself, but this time he'd go boating on an unknown bay, go cycling on an unpopu-lated road, hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster. The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocketknife given to him by his dad. The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o' clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging（伐木） camp where he chatted with some logging workers. One of the workers, Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons（布条）. As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes - a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated hi ... ...
