(
课件网) 1. Balancing and covering all the points. 2. Being well-organized 3. Bettering the expression 4. Beautifying the handwriting 4B _____ contribute to a good writing. improving Writing techniques Better Your Expressions 1 sentence patterns(句式) 1 2 suggestions on how to expand the point(如何拓展要点) Sentence reconstruction (句子再构) 1. 用并列连词(coordinative conjunctions)合并简单句 1)Some like music. Others are fond of sports. Some like music while others are fond of sports. 2)We can relax ourselves through travel, and we can also broaden our horizons. We can not only relax ourselves but also broaden our horizons. 3) Doing too many exercises can't help us learn more. It doesn't contribute to our exam grades, either. Doing too many exercises can neither help us learn more nor contribute to our exam grades. 表并列，递进或顺承 表转折或对比 表选择 表因果关系 and, both...and, neither...nor, not only...but also, as well as, etc. but, yet, while(而) or, either...or, not...but for, so, etc. 2. 简单句变复合句（clause(从句): 定于从句、状语从句、名词性从句） Some students eat too much meat and get overweight. Some students eat so much meat that they get overweight.（结果状从） Some students eat too much meat, which makes them get overweight / which leads to their getting overweight.（定语从句） The reason why some students get overweight is that they eat too much meat.（定从+名从） Sentence reconstruction (句子再构) 3. 状语从句或并列句变非谓语动词 / 形容词 / with + 复合宾语 1) I overslept this morning, so I was late for school. I overslept this morning, thus leading to my being late for school. 2)As I was late for school, I was criticized by the teacher. Being late for school, I was criticized by the teacher. 3) I finished mountains of homework and I felt exhausted but relieved. I finished mountains of homework, exhausted but relieved. 4) As my homework mounts, I have less time to rest. With my homework mounting, I have less time to rest. Sentence reconstruction (句子再构) Sentence reconstruction (句子再构) 4. 普通句式→特殊句式（倒装、强调、省略等） 1) I have never gone to bed before 12 at night since I entered Senior 3. Never have I gone to bed before 12 since ... 2) I can achieve my goal only through hard work. Only through hard work can I achieve my goal. It is only through hard work that I can achieve my goal. 3) Although I'm tired, I know it's worth it. Although tired, I know it's worth it. Tired as/though I am, I know it's worth it. 5. 普通表达→名言谚语 Nobody can succeed without going through hardships. As the old saying/proverb goes, No pains, no gains. How to Expand the Point(如何拓展要点) 【成都七中高考模拟】 假定你是李华，你校将举办中文书法展（Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition）。请写封邮件邀请你的外教John参加，内容包括： 1.时间及地点； 2.展览内容； 3.邀请他学书法 注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ？ Dear John, I’m writing with sincerity to invite you to at ... ...
