初中英语写作公开课

课件36张PPT。Writing书面表达 4 steps of writing(写作四步骤) 1、Find out（审） 2、List out（列） 3、Add (加) 4、Beautify (美：词、句、连接)人们是如何在假期放松自己的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworkHow do people relax themselves on their holidays?Step1. Find out（审） 文体: _____ 时态:_____ 人称:_____ 人们是如何在假期放松自己的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查， 右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。Step1. Find out（审）写什么: _____ 时态:_____ 人称:_____调查报告（A survey）一般现在时第三人称 A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Let’s relax ourselves in the holidays.a lot of /most ofsomesome othera fewStep2. List out(列)用英语简单句列出文章的要点 What do people do to relax themselves on their holiday? We did a survey and here is the result. _____ _____ _____ _____ 26 words6-8Let's put them together!Mark _____ A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Let's get more !Step3. Add （加）Let’s relax ourselves in the holidays.A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Let’s relax ourselves in the holidays.Step3 Add （加）在每个要点后添加拓展相应的内容！A lot of people travel.They usually go for a holiday with their family .他们通常都会和家人一起去度假。Let's do it together! why ？ how ？ what ？ A few people work.他们热衷于工作。They are crazy about work .他们认为工作能给他们带来成就感。They think work can give them a sense of achievement.Let's do it together!Some people stay at home.他们在家看电视或上网。They watch TV or surf the Internet .他们能好好地休息。They can have a good rest .It’s your turn!Some other people visit friends or parents.他们一起开心地吃大餐。They have a big meal together .It’s your turn!Let’s relax ourselves in the holidays.这会使你更健康！/休息好工作起来才有效率！It will make you healthier ! People who relax well work well!It’s your turn! What do people do to relax themselves on their holiday? We did a survey and here is the result. A lot of people travel, they usually go for a holiday with their family. Some people stay at home, they watch TV or surf the Internet. They can have a good rest. Some other people visit friends or parents, they have a big dinner together happily. A few people work, they think work can give them a sense of achievement. Let’s relax ourselves in the holidays. People who relax well work well. 75 wordsWOW!Let's put them together!Mark _____10-12 4 steps of writing(写作四步骤) 1、Find out（审） 2、List out（列） 3、Add (加) 4、Beautify (美：词、句、连接)Beautify方法一:善用词组, 用不同方式表达句子意思。 A lot of people travel. A lot of people prefer to travel. Some people sta ... ...