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课件网) Action Chain in Continuation Writing 四川省广安友谊中学 刘言 四川省广安友谊中学 刘言 Act it out touch your ears cross your arms nod your head close your eyes whisper sth to your partner Think about the question How can you put the elephant in the refrigerator You just need to open the door, put the elephant in the fridge, and close the door. Which sentence is more vivid(生动的） You put the elephant in the refrigerator. You open the door, put the elephant in the fridge, and close the door. Action chain 动作链 Resulting action More detailed and coherent micro-actions Action chain 构造动作链 How to create an action chain 分解动作，形成动作链 将结果性的动作，分解成更细致的连贯性的微动作(2-3个），使动作结果过程化，形成动作链。 pre- action transit-action post- action Action 过渡动作 先前动作 后续动作 拆解 Please describe the following picture and video . The two pandas hugged . The old panda ____ (dash)forward, _____(raise) his son up and hugged him tightly. dashed raised Please describe the following picture and video. Mr. Bean attempted to cheat in the exam. Mr. Bean attempted to cheat in the exam. 环顾四周 靠近同桌 试图瞥一眼答案 moved towards his deskmate looked around attempted to glance at his answer During the exam, Mr. bean looked around, slowly moved towards his deskmate, and attempted to glance at his answers. Please describe the following picture and video. Please describe the following picture and video. Nezha _____ his mom's words, _____ and _____ off the wall. heard grinned jumped 动作拆解 当动作依次发生时： Action chain 1: sb did A, did B and did C（动作三连） Nezha jumped off the wall. （咧嘴笑） Practice--Fill in the blanks 1. 他读了一遍作文，大声地笑了出来，说：“很好。现在再写一次。” 2. 他们端着(carry)早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈。 He _____the essay, _____ loudly and _____,“Great. Now, write it again.” They _____ the breakfast, _____ upstairs and _____ their mother. Action chain 1: sb did A, did B and did C read laughed out said carried went woke up Compare and conclude 同一主语同时发出不同动作, 且次要动作表主动时 The old man sat on the subway, watching his phone and frowning. The old man sat on the subway, watched his phone and frowned. Action chain 2:_____ 主谓..., doing sth / Doing sth, 主谓.... Practice Polish the sentences(润色句子）. 1. Mary saw the ring on the table and felt a little bit shock. _____ 2. Lily opened her notebook and wrote down the teacher's notes quickly. _____ Action chain 2： Doing sth，主谓.../ 主谓...，doing sth Seeing the ring on the table , Mary felt a little bit shock. Lily opened her notebook, writing down the teacher's notes quickly. Compare and conclude 同一主语同时发生不同动作, 且次要动作表被动时 Action chain 3:_____ Praised by Shen Zhengdao, Ne Zha felt flattered. Ne Zha was praised by Shen Zhengdao and felt flattered.（受宠 若惊的） Done (by...), 主谓.... /主谓...,done(by)... Practice Action chain 3： Done(by...) ，主谓... /主 ... ...
