(
课件网) The Most Valuable Gift A Journey of G-I-F-T and W-R-A-P Learning objectives 1. 2. 3. To Structure: Understand the G-I-F-T model To Process: Master the W-R-A-P writing process and write a gift introduction for Jimmy To Value: Feel the love and friendship behind gifts The Most Valuable Gift I Have Ever Received Lead-in What was the best gift for you Why was it special Pre-writing : Jimmy's Valuable Gift Let's listen to Jimmy's story about his valuable gift. The most valuable gift I have ever received was a photo album from my best friend Kevin. Kevin and I were classmates for all six years of primary school. We both liked playing football and listening to music, so we always had a lot of things to talk about. It is wonderful to have such a good friend. However, last summer, Kevin had to move to another city because of his father’s job. Then he gave me a photo album. “It has photos of the memorable events we have experienced together. I’ve also written some notes under each photo,” he said. I was deeply moved. I put the album beside my bed. I always look at it when I think of Kevin. Pre-writing:Learn from Jimmy's Writing Why was it given (What’s the story ) What is the gift What does Jimmy do with it now (Its meaning tomorrow) How did Jimmy feel The most valuable gift Let's find details! Jimmy's Most Valuable Gift A photo album Because Kevin had to move to another city. He was deeply moved. He puts the album beside his bed. He always looks at it when he thinks of Kevin. What is the gift Why was it given How did Jimmy feel What does Jimmy do with it now G ift I nfluence F eeling T omorrow 礼物的基本信息 礼物带来的影响 收到礼物的感受 对未来的意义 Jimmy's Secret: The G-I-F-T Model A photo album Because Kevin had to move to another city. He was deeply moved. He put the album beside his bed. He always look at it when he think of Kevin. What is the gift Why was it given How did Jimmy feel What does Jimmy do with it now Your Task: A Gift for Jimmy Jimmy is leaving Shenyang for Britain. If you were Li Hua, let’s wrap a gift for him. 视频播区域 Jimmy & 李辉 沈阳道别 Your Task: A Gift for Jimmy 真题链接:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jimmy来沈阳旅游了一周,回国前你要送他一件礼物。请你当面向Jimmy介绍这件礼物。(2024年铁西期末) 内容包括: (1)这件礼物是什么; (2)送这件礼物的原因; (3)你的祝福与期待。 注意: (1)词数为80-100;开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Hi, Jimmy, I know you will leave Shenyang for Britain tomorrow. So I've prepared a gift for you._____ _____ While-writing:The W-R-A-P Writing Process W Wonder: Think about your ideas. 构思文章 R Realize: Write your first draft. Let your ideas become real. 写出初稿 A Adjust: Make it better. Check words and grammar. 调整细节 P Present: Share your final work. Show it with your best handwriting 书写工整 G ift I nfluence F eeling T omorrow 礼物的基本信息 礼物带来的影响 收到礼物的感受 对未来 ... ...