写作讲解：自然灾害后的故事 一、作文题目 生活中，自然灾害或许会突然降临，但灾难后的善意与温暖总能照亮人们走出阴霾的路。去年 7 月，你居住的利民社区因短时强降雨引发洪涝灾害，你被困家中，课本被雨水浸湿，陷入了慌乱。 请以写一篇短文，记录这段经历与感悟。 写作要点： 灾难情况：说明洪涝发生的时间（去年 7 月）、地点（利民社区），以及你的具体困境； 暖心瞬间：描述邻居李阿姨的帮助细节（送热粥、烘干课本）； 我的感悟：结合 “灾难中人性闪光” 的主题，写出你现在的成长与改变。 要求：100词左右，要点完整，语句连贯，可适当补充细节。 二、重点词汇表达 词汇 音标 中文释义 /d zɑ st (r)/ 灾难 /fl d/ 洪水 / re nf l/ 降雨 /k mju n ti/ 社区 /tr pt/ 被困的 /s k/ 浸湿 / k mf t/ 安慰 / ne b (r)/ 邻居 / ka ndn s/ 善意 / d / 阴影 /r k v (r)/ 恢复 /spred/ 传播 / t er / 珍惜 / f t n tli/ 幸运地 /smu / 抚平（纸张） / r kld/ 起皱的 三、短语表达 short-time heavy rainfall 短时强降雨 be trapped in 被困在 soak through 完全浸湿 dry out 烘干 cheer sb. up 使某人振作 come out of the shadow 走出阴影 in times of trouble 在困境中 pass on kindness 传递善意 play the leading role 担任主角 warm one’s heart 温暖某人的心 offer practical help 提供实际帮助 短语填空 Last July, our community was affected by _____ (短时强降雨), leading to a small flood. I _____ (被困在) my room because the water outside was too deep. My schoolbag and textbooks _____ (完全浸湿) in the rainwater. Aunt Li helped me _____ (烘干) the wet pages carefully. Her kind words _____ (使我振作) when I felt upset. With her help, I managed to _____ (走出阴影) of the disaster quickly. People always support each other _____ (在困境中). Now I try to _____ (传递善意) by helping my classmates. We should _____ (担任主角) in our own lives instead of being victims. The hot porridge she brought _____ (温暖了我的心) on those cold mornings. The neighbor _____ (提供实际帮助) when I was in panic. 四、写作句型表达及仿写 原句：Last July, a sudden flood hit our community due to short-time heavy rainfall. 仿写结构：[时间], [灾害] hit [地点] due to [原因]. 仿写句中文：去年冬天，一场大雪袭击了我们的小镇，因为强冷空气的到来。 仿写句： . 原句：I was trapped in my house and felt helpless because my textbooks were all soaked. 仿写结构：I was [状态] and felt [情绪] because [原因]. 仿写句中文：我被困在公交车站，感到焦虑，因为我没带伞。 仿写句： . 原句：It was Aunt Li, my kind neighbor, who brought me hot porridge every morning. 仿写结构：It was [人物], [人物关系], who [做的事]. 仿写句中文：是我的同桌，一个热心的女孩，在我生病时帮我记笔记。 仿写句： . 原句：What touched me most was that she helped me dry out and smooth my wet textbooks. 仿写结构：What touched me most was that [具体事件]. 仿写句中文：最让我感动的是他把自己的外套借给了冻得发抖的我。 仿写句： . 原句：With her warm help, I gradually came out of the shadow of the flood. 仿写结构：With [帮助 / 支持], I gradually [达成的状态]. 仿写句中文：在老师的鼓励下，我逐渐克服了对演讲的恐惧。 仿写句： . 原句：Now I understand that we should be the heroines of our lives instead of victims of difficulties. 仿写结构 ... ...
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