(
课件网) 写作二 读后续写 写作突破篇 热考话题一 亲情无边 【佳句积累】 满分细节句(同辈情) 1.Speechless and delighted, she held her brother tightly into her arms, with tears streaming down her cheeks.她高兴得说不出话来,把弟弟紧紧地搂在怀里,泪流满面。 2.Approaching his brother, he gently petted Jackson’s head,saying, “I’m so sorry for losing my temper.” 他走到弟弟身边,轻轻地摸着杰克逊的头,说:“对不起,我发脾气了。” 3.He tiptoed to reach for the doll, and like a responsible elder brother, handed the precious doll to his sister.他踮着脚尖去拿娃娃,像一个负责任的哥哥,把这个珍贵的娃娃递给妹妹。 4.He stood there with a lump in his throat and tried to fight back tears.他站在那里, 喉咙哽塞, 拼命想止住眼泪。 5.He tossed his head gently, without taking his eyes from my plane.他轻轻地摇了摇头, 眼睛始终注视着我的飞机。 6.The carriage went quickly down the path, which was lined on both sides with beautiful dark green trees. Scrooge could hear young Ebenezer and his sister laughing and singing in the carriage.马车飞快地沿着小路驶去, 小路两旁树木美丽葱郁。史克鲁奇听见小埃比尼泽和他妹妹在马车里又笑又唱。 7.On the balcony I sometimes played with my elder sister, Maria. She was seven years old and when my mom was absent she was like a mother to me.我有时和姐姐玛丽亚在阳台上玩。她当时七岁,当我妈妈不在的时候,她就像我的母亲一样。 满分细节句(长辈情) 1.She noticed the sadness which had suddenly come over her mother, and became worried and uncomfortable.她注意到母亲突然悲伤起来, 于是也变得忧虑不安了。 2.I picked up the receiver, and on the other end of the receiver, a tiny voice spoke,“I love you, Daddy.” 我拿起话筒,在话筒的另一头,一个细小的声音说道:“我爱你,爸爸。” 3.A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently.一股幸福与温暖流遍全身,妈妈轻轻地亲了两个姐妹。 4.Seeing his families sitting together harmoniously, the father felt a surge of happiness.看到家人和乐融融地坐在一起,父亲幸福极了。 5.She moved softly towards him, took his hand and put it gently against her cheek.她轻手轻脚地溜到他身旁, 握住他的手, 还把小脸贴在上面。 6.Pulling me to her arms,my mother held me in a long and silent hug. 妈妈把我拉到她怀中,静静地抱了我很久。 满分结尾句 1.It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它。 2.I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter’s love and also, the power of words.我留着这架小飞机,以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。 3.Deeply touched, Dad held the flowers tightly and gently, and immediately gathered us into his arms, saying, “You are my best flowers!”爸爸深受感动,把花紧紧地轻轻地握在手里,并立刻把我们抱在怀里,说:“你们是我最好的花!” 4.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us up.透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光和我们家人之间的爱温暖了我们。 【语篇演练】 (2024·安徽合肥一中第二次质检) ... ...
