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课件网) 读后续写 PART Learning objectives 1. 学会用六要素概括续写的故事线。 2.会运用五五拍戏法根据所提供的内容预测故事情节，写出五个关键的句子。 3.增强学生对于读后续写的解题信心。 假如你是一个编剧， 那么，读后续写对你来说， 就等同于丢给你一个没写完的剧本，让你创作。 "剧本"写作指南 1.原文一致原则 内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致，结局合理。 2.正能量原则 故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了，吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法。 3.曲折性原则 凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 ①My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. ②There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. ③My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. ④It was an awkward moment. I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. ⑤A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise-a shock, actually: "Not a chance." Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he' ll get over it, I reasoned. ⑥Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience(良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. Para1: I realized it was me who was at fault. _____ Para 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door._____ Task1. Fill in the blanks. Who When Where What How Why Elements of the story I ,my wife, my brother,Toby in the early summer at our new home;at brother's home restore the relationship the importance of love ,understanding and empathy ？ My wife and I hosted_____, but my brother_____, which could_____ children,so Toby was kept outside. The sudden rain forced us to _____ except __ ... ...
