中考英语二轮 书面表达热门主题——机器人科技（范文两篇+名师点评）

中考英语书面表达热门主题———机器人科技（范文两篇+名师点评） 假如你是李华，你校英语校报在上一期的报刊中报道了上文中的“人形机器人马拉松”，引起了广大同学们的兴趣。下期报刊计划以“The Robot I Want”为主题，请你写一篇英语短文进行投稿。 注意：(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。 (3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头已经给出，不计人总词数。 一、高频核心词汇（分场景分类） 1. 机器人相关基础词汇 核心名词：robot（机器人）、android（人形机器人）、automaton（自动机）、roboticist（机器人专家） 功能类词汇：service robot（服务机器人）、industrial robot（工业机器人）、robotic surgery（机器人手术）、smart robot（智能机器人） 动作类词汇：operate（操作）、assist（协助）、perform（执行）、replace（替代）、accomplish（完成） 2. 科技类升级词汇（高分替换） 形容词：advanced（先进的）、intelligent（智能的）、electronic（电子的）、marvelous（了不起的）、significant（重大的） 名词：technology（技术）、innovation（创新）、invention（发明）、advancement（进步）、breakthrough（突破） 动词：enhance（提升）、facilitate（促进）、boost（推动）、explore（探索）、resolve（解决） 二、万能句型（按写作结构分类） 1. 开头引入句（引出主题 / 现象） With the rapid advancement of science and technology, robots have gradually become an indispensable part of our life. Have you ever imagined that robots will take on more and more important roles in the near future It is undeniable that robotic technology has brought great changes to people’s daily life and work. 2. 功能描述句（介绍机器人作用） Some robots are designed to deal with boring or dangerous tasks that are not suitable for humans. Service robots can assist people with housework, such as cleaning rooms, cooking meals and taking care of the elderly. In the medical field, robotic surgery has helped improve the accuracy of operations and reduce patients’ recovery time. 3. 观点表达句（发表看法 / 利弊） From my perspective, robots not only bring convenience to our life but also promote the development of society. On the one hand, robots can save us a lot of time; on the other hand, we should avoid over-reliance on them. Although robots have many advantages, we need to pay attention to potential problems like job replacement. 4. 结尾总结句（升华主题 / 展望） Undoubtedly, robotic technology will continue to make progress and bring more surprises to our life. In conclusion, we should make full use of robotic technology to create a better future for humanity. What’s most exciting is that robots will play a more positive role in education, healthcare and other fields in the future. 三、逻辑衔接词（提升文章连贯性） 1. 递进关系（补充观点） Moreover、Furthermore、What’s more、In addition、Additionally Not only...but also...、Besides、Above all 2. 转折对比（表达利弊 / 差异） However、Nevertheless、On the contrary、Conversely、On the other hand Although、Even though、Despite the fact that 3. 因果关系（说明原因 / 结果） Therefore、Consequently、Thus、As a result、Accordingly Due t ... ...