(
课件网) Developing ideas — writing Unit 4 Breaking boundaries I Pre-writing What does a speech usually include Pre-writing Body a speech Opening Summary Who the person is. What boundary he has broken. How he achieved this. Comments on him. While-writing 假如你是李华，请你写一篇演讲稿，介绍一位突破国界的伟人—例如，诺尔曼·白求恩Henry Norman Bethune。 要求：1. 这个人是谁，他打破了什么国界？ 2. 他是怎么突破国界的？ 3. 对他的评价 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时 While-writing 句式：背诵 It’s a great honor to be here to give the speech. Today, I’m doing to introduce a great man who… He broke national boundaries by becoming… He felt a sense of pride and mission as a Canadian doctor who… What set him apart from others was his selfless spirit and devotion to the cause. I admire Bethune’s bravery and noble spirit, risking his life to help Chinese during the war. II While-writing While-writing: Think and write Henry Norman Bethune A Canadian/born in 1890 A famous doctor/surgeon(外科医生) In January 1938, Bethune joined the Chinese to struggle against the Japanese invaders（侵略者）. Sacrifice his life for Chinese anti-Japanese war(中国抗日战争牺牲生命) Introduction Useful expressions:（句式） While-writing: Think and write Opening Today, I’m going to introduce a great man who... He was an admirable doctor..., who was hard-working and... He was born in ..., in ... He broke national boundaries by becoming ... Useful sentence structures: opening While-writing: Think and write 1. 今天我将给大家介绍一位伟人，他为了中国人行医献出生命，他就是亨利·诺尔曼·白求恩。（定语从句） Today I’m going to introduce a great man who devoted his life to practising medicine for the people of China — Dr Norman Bethune. 2. 他是个值得敬佩的人，勤勉，想要对世界有所影响。（定语从句） He was an admirable person who was hard-working and wanted to make a difference in the world. 3. 他通过成为为数不多的白人医生之一在战争时期帮助中国人，打破了国家的边界。 He broke national boundaries by becoming one of the few Western doctors to help the Chinese in their wartime. Post-writing: Reference Text 1. Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honor to be here to give the speech. Today I’m going to introduce a great man who devoted his life to practising medicine for the people of China — Dr Norman Bethune.（定语从句）2. He was born in 1890, in Canada. 3. He was a admirable person who was hard-working and wanted to make a difference in the world.（定语从句）4. He broke national boundaries by becoming one of the few Western doctors to help the Chinese in their wartime. While-writing: Think and write Henry Norman Bethune 怎么打破边界？How ？ 当时中国的状况： 军队、当地人的医疗条件差 药品、医疗设备、手术器械不充足 医务人员经验不足，没有良好训练 白求恩做了什么？ 不断努力工作，救助伤员 培训医务人员 发明先进的医疗设备 连续69个小时做了115次手术 尽管不是中国人，却为中国的抗日战争牺牲生命。 无私、对事业的奉献精神、使命感 Body部分 思路引导 ... ...
