(
课件网) Reading for writing MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE 日期: 2023.4.4 授课人: 廖鹭鹭 Scenario Your friend Anna is coming to China as an exchange student next year. Today, you received messages from Anna, which said... Scenario Lead-in What is your most impressive festival experience How A diary “My Amazing Naadam Experience” Write about your most impressive festival experience I will never forget the... that I experienced. Who are they What is the festival Lead-in Naadam Festival Where: . When: . How long: . in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region falls on the 4th day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar usually lasts (for) 3 days 内蒙古自治区 The meaning of “Naadam”: . “games” Events of the festival: . . horse racing, wrestling and archery The author’s favorite event: . the horse races Read for information and organization wrestling archery horse racing My Festival Experience Opening Paragraph Closing Paragraph Body Give a brief of the experience. Describe . . . State . festival and the surroundings the topic Describe in detail . the festival activities summary the start of the when where with whom main feelings Read for information and organization Tip 1: When writing a narrative essay about festival experience, we should follow certain to make it more organized. 在写一篇关于节日体验的叙事性文章时,我们应该遵循一定的结构,使文章更有条理。 structures Find out the structure. Read for information and organization Tip 2: When writing about festival experience, we can follow the order of time,use the first person "I", and the past tense. 描述经历时,可按时间顺序。(使用第一人称、过去时态) How to start the passage 1.What’s the type of the passage A.Narration B. Exposition C.Argumentation 2.What is the order in which the passage is written A.The order of time and events. B. The order of place. the first person(第一人称) past tense(过去时) Person(人称): Tense(时态): Opening Paragraph State . the topic what where,when with whom main feelings opening sentence Para. 1 Write your opening sentence开头句 : I'll never forget the day when I experienced (festival) with sb. (when )(where ), which was so amazing/joyful/ exciting. I'll always remember the day when I ...because... Read the first sentence. I will never forget the day when I experienced The Mid-Autumn Festival with my family last year, which was so joyful. Write your opening sentence. opening sentence-5W1H Read para.2 and circle the verbs. set off to... early with... saw sb. doing... Some were doing..., some were doing..., and others were doing... Burin told me that... Tip 3: When describing the start (preparation) of the festival and the surroundings, we can write "what I saw" and "what I heard" to make your article vivid. 描述场景时,可以结合所见、所闻, 使文章更加生动, 抓住读者的注意力。 Body paragraph-write about the surroundings 5 days before the Spring Festival, I saw my parents _____ and decorating the house with ... ...