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课件网) UNIT 11 Sad movies make me cry. 创新表达—写作能力提升练 不同的人对幸福有着不同的理解。有人认为身心健康是幸福，有人认为生活条件好是幸福，有人认为关系和谐是幸福……请你以“How to Make Our Life Happier ”为题，从好的生活习惯、健康的饮食习惯、良好的身体状况和保持乐观(stay optimistic) 等方面写一篇英语短文。词数80 左右。 ［谋篇布局］厘清文章要素，构建文章结构。 ［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。 1. 我们应该有充足的睡眠，尽量不要熬夜。 We should _____. 2. 我们最好吃正确种类的食品，远离垃圾食品、吸烟、喝酒。 We’d better _____ _____. get enough sleep and try not to stay up late have the right kinds of food and stay away from junk food, smoking and drinking 3. 当我们遇到不愉快的事情时，我们应该跟父母或朋友谈谈。 When we meet unhappy things, we are supposed to _____. talk about them with our parents or friends ［连句成篇］ How to Make Our Life Happier Different people have different ideas about a happy life. In my opinion, keeping healthy will make our life happier. After all, money and fame don’t always make people happy. First, good living habits are necessary. We should get enough sleep and try not to stay up late. Second, we should have healthy eating habits. We’d better have the right kinds of food and stay away from junk food, smoking and drinking. Third, we should take more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, it’s important to stay optimistic every day. When we meet unhappy things, we are supposed to talk about them with our parents or friends. I hope by doing these we can be healthier and we can make our life happier. 高分点评: 1.作者思路清晰，采用了“总—分—总”三段式结构；2.序数词First，Second，Third, Finally的正确使用，使结构更加清晰，层次更加分明；3.一些短语如in my opinion，after all，stay up late, stay away from, build up our bodies 的使用，显示出作者良好的英语功底；4. 时间状语从句，宾语从句以及 “It is + adj. + to do”句型的使用使文章生动、流畅。 若成长是一本著作，那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字；如果成长是一张白纸，那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“How I work out problems”为题，根据写作要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。词数不少于80。 要点提示： 1. 你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的？2. 你又是用什么方法解决的？ 3. 你的感想是什么？ _____ _____ _____ How I work out problems Problems and worries are normal in our life. But don't worry. I would like to share with you how I work out problems. First, I often tell my friends about my worries. Because I know they're always there for me. Then, I am used to doing some exercise like running. Doing exercise can make me feel better. What's more, reading books is _____ sometimes useful for me, too. When I read, I forget my problems and worries. I think we should learn to control our feelings. And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you.(
课件网) UNIT 11 Sad movies make me cry. 课时4 Section B(1a－1e) ... ...
