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课件网) 定语和定语从句 在写作中的应用 1.只要两句话的主语一致,就可以把后一句话改成非限制性定语从句。如果先行词是人,引导词就用who/whom;如果先行词是物,引导词就用which。 ①莉莉是一个老师,她喜欢唱歌和跳舞。 【翻译】Lily is a teacher. She enjoys singing and dancing. 【拓展】Lily is a teacher, who enjoys singing and dancing. ②这次活动很有趣,可以让你交到更多的中国朋友。 【翻译】This activity is interesting. It can help you make more Chinese friends. 【拓展】This activity is interesting, which can help you make more Chinese friends. 1.只要两句话的主语一致,就可以把后一句话改成非限制性定语从句。如果先行词是人,引导词就用who/whom;如果先行词是物,引导词就用which。 ③我爸爸是一个警察,他总是尽力去帮助需要帮助的人。 【翻译】My father is a policeman. He always tries his best to help people in need. 【拓展】My father is a policeman,who always tries his best to help people in need. 1.只要两句话的主语一致,就可以把后一句话改成非限制性定语从句。如果先行词是人,引导词就用who/whom;如果先行词是物,引导词就用which。 ④英语是世界上广泛使用的语言,它能帮助你更流畅地阅读全世界的名著。 【翻译】English is a widely spoken language in the world,and it can help you to read the world's classics more fluently. 【拓展】English is a widely spoken language in the world, which can help you to read the world's classics more fluently. 2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。 ①Keeping pets can relieve loneliness. 【解析】句子读起来有种干瘪的感觉。为了使之生动,可以加上定语,句子读起来就会感觉不同。 【拓展】Keeping those pets that look so cute and smart can relieve loneliness of some senior citizens and children who stay at home alone. 养那些看起来既可爱又聪明的宠物可以缓解一些独自待在家里的老人和孩子的孤独感。 2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。 ② Worshipping stars blindly will waste time. 【解析】句子有些简单且片面,加上定语就讲明了具体的原因。 【拓展】Worshipping stars who might be good at singing and dancing blindly will waste a lot of time of young people. 盲目崇拜那些可能擅长唱歌和跳舞的明星会浪费年轻人的很多时间。 2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。 ③ Reading books can broaden the horizons. 【解析】这个句子读起来没有语法错误,但缺乏生动性。尝试一下给名词加定语。首先这个句子有两个名词,分别是 books 和 horizons,可以用单词、短语或者定语从句来修饰它们。 【拓展】Reading books which are beneficial to our mental and physical health can broaden the horizons of children and adults.阅读有益于我们身心健康的书籍可以开阔孩子和成人的眼界。 2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。 ④Surfing the Internet wastes time. 【解析】这句话有两个名词———分别是 Internet 和 time,考虑到加的定语太多也不好,所以可以只给time 加定语。 【拓展】Surfing the Internet wastes time of students who should spend more time on their study. 上网浪费了学生的时间,他们应该把更多的时间花在学习上。 Writing pract ... ...