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课件网) 高一英语续写指导 原文理解+情节构建+语言速写 ①Ava, a fifth-grader, longed for a cell phone like her peers but had to wait until she was thirteen. To persuade her parents, she penned an essay, demonstrating she was mature enough for a cell phone. Her parents, impressed, gave her an old phone. ②“Ava,” her dad said seriously, “a cell phone isn’t just for fun and games. It’s a significant responsibility. You must keep your phone secure. You must silence it in public spaces. You must...” He listed all of the ways that she had to be responsible with her phone. But Ava, too busy with choosing the perfect wallpaper, downloading apps, and chatting with her best friend Sarah, only half-listened. ③Over the weekend, Sarah’s mom took the girls to a movie. Normally Ava avoided horror films, but Sarah’s pleading words with funny memes (表情包) had somehow convinced Ava that the movie might actually be enjoyable. Before the movie started, Sarah’s mom instructed the girls to silence their phones out of respect for others. As the movie’s tension built, Ava found herself growing increasingly uncomfortable. “I need to go to the bathroom,” Ava whispered to Sarah. ④After the movie, while waiting for Sarah’s mom to fetch the car, Ava felt a sinking feeling. “I can’t find my phone!” she shrieked, patting down all of her pockets. Panic-stricken, Ava searched her bag, yet her phone seemed to have vanished. Ava got into the car, her stomach in knots. ⑤“Are you going to tell your parents ” Sarah whispered to Ava on their ride back. Ava was silent, her mind racing with the consequences. She could envision her parents’ disappointed faces and harsh words. She feared that this incident might lead to her parents taking away the privilege of having a phone altogether. ⑥As they arrived, Ava climbed out of the car and trudged home, her heart heavy with what had happened. Paragraph 1: The moment Ava walked in, her parents greeted her with a smile._____ Paragraph 2: Then her parents drove Ava back to the cinema._____ 读原文 找出记叙文要素 Time over the weekend Place P1:community bazaar, P2: the neighborhood or in the special salon Characters Home, cinema. Main Conflict Ava loses her phone soon after getting it and is worried about her parents' reaction. Theme: Responsibility and consequences of having a cell phone. Emotional Changes of Ava Longing for a phone → excited after getting it → uncomfortable during the movie → panicked after losing the phone → worried and heavy-hearted. Theme: Responsibility of having a cell phone, mature 记叙文要素 ①Ava, a fifth-grader, longed for a cell phone like her peers but had to wait until she was thirteen. To persuade her parents, she penned an essay, demonstrating she was mature enough for a cell phone. Her parents, impressed, gave her an old phone. ②“Ava,” her dad said seriously, “a cell phone isn’t just for fun and games. It’s a significant respon ... ...
