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课件网) Writing a letter of advice/suggestions. 一、建议信 一般而言， 大多要求考生根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理的建议，材料多为征求建议的信件。 建议信 假如你是21st Century报社的编辑李华，你收到一封来自Lori的信。她向你询问如何交友。请给她回一封信，并提出建议。 Dear Lori， I’m sorry that you have trouble in making friends. Everyone needs friends，and how to make friends is an important subject. Firstly，to make friends，you must be friendly to others. A smile is like a magnet that draws people. Secondly，try to remember others’ names，which will make them feel that they have made an impression on you. Besides，if you disagree with others，don’t argue but discuss with them. Finally，offer your help whenever they are in trouble. As it says，a friend in need is a friend indeed. I hope you’ll find my tips useful，and certainly you’ll have more and more friends if you try your best. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua 方法： 1.注意时态 2.布局（P1,P2,P3分别写什么内容） 3.打草稿；（列出P2内容，可以用中文） 4.完成文章 注意：1）学会用连接词使文章更有逻辑性； 2）尝试使用高级词汇和语句。 内容结构 建议信一般采取三段式结构： P1：点出对方出现的问题以及写这封信的目的。 (1-2句话) P2：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，提出自己的建议、方法。 （5-6句话，3点建议左右） P3：表达希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。 （1-2句话） 首段 ◆I am writing to share some advice with you. ◆I’m sorry that you have trouble in sth.(with doing sth.)... ◆I’m glad to receive your letter/hear from you. ◆It is my pleasure to give you some advice/suggestions Hearing/ Listening/Knowing that you ...,I’m writing to you to give you some suggestions. 中段 ◆I would like to suggest/recommend that(句子)... ◆I am afraid you’d better(do sth.)... ◆I suggest that you should(do sth.)... ◆In my opinion, it would be wise to(do sth.)... From my point of view,... 尾段 ◆In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. ◆I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. 衔接词 首先 此外 最后 At first...First of all ... To begin with ...To start with... Besides...In addition...What'more... At last... Finally... In a word... In short ... Last but not least,/ Most importantly,... 衔接词 举例子 转折 在我看来 For example....For instance....Such as...... But...However...On the contrary...On the other hand... In my opinion...In my view...From my point of view... As far as I'm concerned ... 建议信 Dear _____, I am very glad/delighted to hear from you. Knowing that you have some problems about _____ , I am writing to make some suggestions here. From my point of view, it would be wise of you to take the following measures.To begin with, _____（建议1）. What’s more, (建议2). In addition, (建议3). I am sure that_____(对建议的评价/你的期待). I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/advice useful, and if you have any other question, please don’t hesitate to turn to me. I am looking ... ...
