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课件网) 读后续写 Continuation Writing Four Factors 1 2 3 4 故事线 Storyline 突破点 Target 亮点 Outstanding Points 基本点 Pin Down the theme 故事线S Go through the text and get the storyline Go through the text & Get the storyline 二年一班 This PPT template for the rice husk designer pencil demo works, focusing on the production of high-end design templates, I hope 三年一班 This PPT template for the rice husk designer pencil demo works, focusing on the production of high-end design templates, I hope 5W: WHAT WHO WHERE WHEN WHY +HOW THEME 实战演练：夫妻野外徒步后争吵，妻子独自出行迷路森林，等待救援。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom.“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp’’ and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. She turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain “Tom!”She cried.“Help!’’ No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the father she walked, the more confused she become. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him...... On weekend in July In a forest Jane, Tom Jane was lost Go through the text& Get the storyline A quarrel with Tom,her husband WHO WHAT WHERE WHEN WHY Theme 1.Summary Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end. 2.Theme Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts. But no more helicopters came and it was dark._____ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _____ 突破点T 借助段首，构造内容 突破点 para 1 aBut no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane 是如何熬过这个夜晚的？ 1.How did Jane feel then 2.How did Jane make it through the night 3.Did she fall asleep and what was she thinking of para 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Jane 还未获救，今天会发生什么？ 1.Was Jane rescued and who rescued her 2.How was she rescued and how did she feel then 亮点--刻画细节 环境、语言、心理、动作描写 丰富句式：非谓语，从句，倒装，独立主格，虚拟语气，强调句，感叹句 修辞丰富：比喻，夸张，拟人 1.环境描写 万能句式：Immediately/ Suddenly/, an absolute/ a complete+n.+ruled the+地点n. + and a wave of +情绪n. +washed/swept over sb. 突然！一种绝对的....控制了（ruled）...,并且一波+情绪+席卷了sb. Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her. 一阵绝对的黑暗控制了森林，并且一波恐惧（terror）席卷了Jane. 2.动作+心理描写 万能句式：One’s heart pounding fiercely and one’s palm s ... ...
