(
课件网) “依托主题与核心情节”的有效扩写实践 ———The Valleyview Snowstorm 新高考 读后续写 时间：2025.10. Discuss and answer the questions. 1.Describe with one word: What is happening in the picture Snowstorm. 2.Imagine you are at school and a sudden snowstorm traps all of you inside. How would you feel anxious restless worried frightened overwhelmed alarming Part 1 Lead in 3.In this situation, what are the four most urgent problems that need to be addressed 4.Who do you think would step up to help Part 1 Lead in food accommodation emotional comfort staying warm Teachers, school staff, volunteers, parents, nearby residents, snowplow operators…. Part 2 Before writing Read and complete the table below. Setting (场景) Characters (人物) Problems & Conflicts (问题与冲突) Actions taken (已采取的行动) Problems to be addressed (待解决的问题) A severe snowstorm hit Valleyview School in January, leaving over 300 students trapped on campus. Teachers (I), students, principal, Earl (gatekeeper), bus drivers, snowplow drivers, nearby parents/residents No food or proper place to sleep. Risk of power outage and freezing pipes. Earl maintained the heater and pipes. Parents were called. Nearby residents brought sandwiches, soup, blankets and board games. How to arrange for entertainment and sleep What would happen the next morning Read the two opening sentences again and try to continue the storyline. Part 2 Before writing Before night fell, we worked out entertaining and sleeping arrangements for the kids. The next morning the snow stopped and people began to clear the snow. Plot 1: Entertaining arrangements Plot 2: Sleeping arrangements Plot 3: Nursing care Paragraph 1 Plot 4: Clean up the road Plot 5: Take back home Plot 6: Ending Paragraph 2 What to write Part 2 Before writing Plot 1: Entertaining arrangements Plot 2: Sleeping arrangements Plot 3: Nursing care Paragraph 1 Plot 4: Clean up the road Plot 5: Take back home Plot 6: Ending Paragraph 2 How did we entertain the kids What did we do to arrange for the kids to sleep How did we ensure the kids’ safety How did people clear the snow How did we take the kids back home Summarize the theme. Think and figure out the key points of what to write. Part 3 While writing How to write According to the six plots, try to complete your first draft. We organized them to play board games and storytelling competitions. 我们组织他们玩棋盘游戏和讲故事。 We began to set up sleeping areas for them. 我们开始为他们布置睡觉的地方。 Before night fell, we worked out entertaining and sleeping arrangements for the kids. Plot 1: Entertaining arrangements How did we entertain the kids Part 3 While writing How to write , we organized them to play board games and storytelling competitions . . . , we began to set up sleeping areas for them. After dividing the kids into groups so that they could keep themselves in high spirit Seeing the kids fully engaged in activities under the g ... ...
