(
课件网) How to Complete a Story Continuation Writing Contents Read for the theme 读主旨 Read for the plot and emotion 读情节和情感 Discussion and writing 分析语言风格 Presentation and evaluation 展示与评价 A1 A2 A3 A4 A5 Analyze the language style 讨论与写作 A6 Summary and homework 总结与巩固作业 S1 Pre-writing deep blue sky cotton-like clouds rolling mountains colourful flowers green grass like a huge blanket What’s Jane’s choice Read for the theme A1 This past summer, my family went on our yearly vacation in a cottage on a lake. There were various activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and building sand castle on the beach. In the evenings, we gathered on the beach, having great fun. However, by the third day of our vacation, I noticed my sister, Jane, spent most of her time watching videos and looking through online shops indoors. She was so addicted to her cell phone! Over dinner, I told Jane we would hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning. I stared at her,"Put your phone away and enjoy the scenery. It ' s really amazing." “ Well," Jane shrugged （耸） her shoulders and answered unwillingly," there are some bargains tomorrow in several online shops, so I ' ll not be available." "Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views. Hiking is fun!" "Sounds more like punishment than a vacation." she didn't look up from her soup and mumbled （嘟嚷）," I cannot walk that far." When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top, she nodded, "OK, I’ll go." The next morning was perfect for a hike, with sunny clear skies and gentle winds. I got up early and packed some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the camera. Jane came slowly downstairs, and announced in a very passive voice," I’m ready to go, Jim ." Anyway, we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our eyes. Against the blue skies, a rough path wound (蜿蜒) to the top of the mountain across the lake with wild flowers and grass on both sides. The sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the lake. We began from the path. "I’m still wondering if this is a good idea, but if you could do it, I could also do." She complained, frowning. 2 1 3 4 7 8 6 5 theme 1. Who-person _____;_____; my family 2. Where -place 3.When-time 4. What happened 6. How to do a cottage on a lake, beach, _____across the lake Last summer--_____ Jane spent most of her time on her _____ indoors. Jane was asked to ___ phone down and ___ to the top of the mountain to enjoy the _____. Read for theme（主旨） A1 5. Why Jane were _____ to her phone. 5W1H P1:She hiked unwillingly and missing her _____. P2: She fell in love with outdoor _____. 7. Ending-- I (Jim) Jane( my sister), a mountain morning cellphone addicted put hike scenery P1:She followed me , her mind wandering. P2:Reaching the top, Jane widened her eyes, shouting, "How fantastic!" phone vie ... ...
