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课件网) Continuation Writing 读后续写 3 steps Step 1 读 Reading Step 2 续 Predicting Step 3 写 Writing 一:分析文本,理清情节和情感、确定主题 情节: 在某时间某地点某人发生了什么事情?/遇到了什么困难? 情感: 自卑;焦虑;害怕;抵触新事物;自傲; 主题: 展现积极的情感 个人成长类文本 二:续写 解决遇到的困难 消极的情感得以转变 注意: 时态:过去时 人称:看主人公 人物:找到影响故事发展的主要人物;不增加人物 情节:只解决文中呈现的问题,不增加旁支情节 语言:人物间的谈话不能通篇都是 直接引语 升华:弘扬真善美 个人成长类文本 Triiiiiingggggggggggg,the bell rang(嗡嗡作响;按铃). Suddenly I felt my heart beating(跳动;敲击) wildly(极其;疯狂地) and fear rose(rise增加) within me.I was nervous as I started to feel sick(恶心的),really sick.I ran to the bathroom and cleaned my face with water. I felt my heart pounding(猛打;连续重击) in my chest(胸膛),hard and loud as I looked into the mirror(镜子) and murmured(低语)“Come on,you can do this.” 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 试题再现 para. 1 情绪描写--紧张害怕--自我激励 一、分析文本,理清情节和情感、确定主题 Some were looking forward to this moment for ages, but not me. I become very anxious every time I imagine how uncomfortable it would be on the stage(舞台), and being the center(中心) of attention. If it was a speech, I could manage(处理;管理), but repeating(重复) a scene(场景) from a movie that has already been done by professional actors(专业的演员) is simply hard because we might get compared to(对比) them. But there was no choice. It was arranged(安排) by my art teacher, Mr.Smith,who is a tall handsome gentleman(英俊的绅士) wearing big smiles all the time. He is one of the most famous teachers in our school and students love his performance classes a lot. para. 2 解释紧张原因--重现影视经典;引出人物Mr. Smith 一、分析文本,理清情节和情感、确定主题 有克服焦虑的能力,但害怕对比,不相信自己 思考:Mr. Smith是不是主要人物?他的性格特点对后面的剧情发展的作用 As I made it(成功到达) to the school hall(大厅). I went over(复习;检查) the script(剧本)in my head. Suddenly I tensed(紧张) as I couldn‘t remember all the lines(台词;歌词;诗行). Once I was there in the school hall, my brain literally(确实地;简直;按照字面意义地) stopped working because of all the noise and the tension(紧张;焦虑) in the air. para. 3 表演之前,由于大厅内的噪音和紧张气氛,我大脑一片空白 As soon as the teachers who were supposed to(应该做…) judge(判断;评判) our performances entered(进入), the crowd(人群;拥挤) became quiet and the performances began. I was really nervous until the first performer was called, because I was really tired of being the first in everything as my name was the first in the register(n.&v.登记;注册).// But the more I waited, the more tired I got of waiting. There came a point(倒装) where I who once was feeling sick and scared(害怕的) of performing,wanted to go on stage and get my performance done. para. 4 表演开始,没有被第一个叫到,我的 ... ...