第二部分 背写作范文·品评中悟道高分缘由(写作练后背) 满分作文赏析背诵 说明：文中黑体部分为亮点词汇，波浪线部分为亮点句式，多揣摩领悟，以下同。 一、背“应用文”范文———学范式、学亮点 Dear Mark， Hope your week is going well. After careful consideration, I've decided to opt for “English Story Sharing” as our weekly activity. Stories serve as an engaging vehicle for language acquisition. Selecting and presenting beloved short tales (动名词短语作主语) not only enhances our vocabulary and comprehension but also fosters lively discussions about plots and themes. Moreover, it offers a window into diverse cultures, infusing our learning with richness and delight (现在分词短语作状语). This interactive approach is sure to captivate everyone's interest. Thanks for giving us a chance to voice our opinions. I would like it if you could take my ideas into account (it为形式宾语，if 引导真正的宾语从句)．Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 第一段：表明选择。 第二段：详细说明为什么选择“English Story Sharing”作为学习小组新增的每周学习活动。 此处考生容易重复表述理由或者表述的理由没有说服力。 第三段：表示感谢，并期待外教考虑自己提出的想法。 二、悟“读后续写”范文———学构思、学表达 |范|文|一| One day when Ella came home, Grandmother was crying.Ella rushed over and asked what was wrong.“I miss my home and my friends so much，” Grandmother sobbed.On hearing the words, Ella felt guilty.Memories of their baking, gardening and sewing together in Grandmother's old house crossed her mind. Hugging Grandmother tightly (现在分词短语作伴随状语), Ella couldn't help saying, “I have been preparing a surprise for you with my friends.I'm sure you will be happy to see it, but it hasn't been finished.” Confused and curious (形容词短语作状语), Grandmother looked at Ella, whose eyes shined with sincerity (定语从句)! Ella raised her eyebrows and said, “Come with me.” When Aunt Grace opened the door, Ella explained why Grandmother was there with her. Immediately, Aunt Grace invited them in.Grandmother's face lit up as she looked at the unfinished quilt with sunflowers on it (with＋宾语＋宾语补足语)．“How beautiful! Can I join you？” All of them agreed at once.So four of them sat down, sewed and chatted together.It seemed as if they had been back to the good old days in Kansas (表语从句)．Ella hadn't heard Grandmother sound so cheerful since they left Kansas (时间状语从句)．At that moment, Ella smiled, feeling relieved.It was love and companionship that made Grandmother feel better and happier (强调句型)． |范|文|二| One day when Ella came home, Grandmother was crying.Seeing Grandmother burying her face in her hands (现在分词短语作状语), Ella rushed to her and held her hands tightly to give her comfort.Grandmother looked up, her eyes red and tearful (独立主格结构), and said she missed Kansas terribly and felt like she didn't belong here.Hearing this, Ella felt heartbroken, and realized she had spent too little time with Grandmother recently (宾语从句)．But the “su ... ...
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