
《疯狂动物城2》中积累读后续写动作、情绪和主题升华语料素材 一、动作描写板块———适配影片探案、追逐、和解名场面 (一)核心素材积累 本板块素材聚焦《疯狂动物城2》中朱迪与尼克探案、与林雪猁家族对抗、角色间协作等核心动作场景,精准匹配高考读后续写中“紧张冲突”“伙伴协作”类情节,重点积累“快速移动”“精准抓捕”“隐蔽行动”类动作短语,增强描写的画面感与真实性。 攀爬与冲刺类:climb quickly along the slippery pipe(沿湿滑管道快速攀爬)、sprint toward(朝……冲刺)、stride forward(大步向前) 抓捕与稳住类:dart forward to catch(猛地扑过去抓住)、wrap one's tail around(用尾巴缠绕)、steady oneself(稳住身形) 隐蔽与盗取类:curl up one's body(蜷缩身体)、slide silently past(悄无声息地滑过)、steal the sketch(盗取草图) 对抗与逼近类:flick one's tail forcefully(用力甩动尾巴)、ram into(猛地撞向)、trap sb. in the narrow alley(将某人逼到狭窄巷口) 观察与行动类:tiptoe closer(踮起脚尖靠近)、observe carefully(仔细观察)、pat sb. on the shoulder(拍某人肩膀) (二)翻译练习 1. 朱迪攥紧爪子,沿着湿滑的管道快速攀爬,朝着湿地市场的方向冲刺。 _____ 2. 尼克猛地扑过去抓住下坠的朱迪,尾巴紧紧缠绕住管道边缘稳住身形。 _____ 3. 蛇盖瑞蜷缩起身体,悄无声息地滑过守卫的脚边,盗取了气候墙的原始草图。 _____ 4. 林雪猁用力甩动尾巴,猛地撞向朱迪,将她逼到狭窄的巷口。 _____ 5. 朱迪深吸一口气,踮起脚尖悄悄靠近,仔细观察着湿地市场里的每一个身影。 _____ 6. 尼克拍了拍朱迪的肩膀,转身大步走向警车,眼神坚定地准备揭开真相。 _____ (三)参考答案 1. Judy clenched her paws, climbed quickly along the slippery pipe, and sprinted toward the Wetland Market. 2. Nick darted forward to catch the falling Judy, wrapping his tail tightly around the pipe edge to steady himself. 3. Gary the snake curled up his body, slid silently past the guard's feet, and stole the original sketch of the Climate Wall. 4. The lynx flicked his tail forcefully, rammed into Judy abruptly, and trapped her in the narrow alley. 5. Judy took a deep breath, tiptoed closer quietly, and observed every figure in the Wetland Market carefully. 6. Nick patted Judy on the shoulder, turned around and strode toward the police car, ready to uncover the truth with a firm look. 二、情绪表达板块———贴合角色坚守、委屈、释怀等情感 (一)核心素材积累 本板块素材围绕《疯狂动物城2》中角色的核心情绪变化,如朱迪面对不公的愤怒、尼克与朱迪争执后的委屈、蛇盖瑞沉冤得雪的欣喜等,覆盖高考读后续写中“委屈失落”“坚定坚守”“释然温暖”等高频情绪场景,通过“神态+心理”的复合表达,让情绪描写更细腻立体。 愤怒与无助类:feel both angry and helpless(既愤怒又无助)、with tears welling up in one's eyes(眼眶泛起泪光)、due to systemic injustice(因系统性不公) 欣喜与激动类:be overjoyed(欣喜若狂)、one's voice trembles with excitement(声音因激动而颤抖)、clear one's ancestor's injustice(洗清祖先冤屈) 委屈与挣扎类:be filled with grievance(满心委屈)、wander alone in the rainy night(独自徘徊在雨夜)、inner struggle(内心充满挣扎) 愧疚与坚定类:feel deeply guilty(深感愧疚)、determine to make up for(决心弥补)、strengthen one's faith(坚定信念 ... ...
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