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课件网) 写作讲评 Soft golden light from the autumn sun shone through the tree tops as high school students Chloe and Noah walked through Whispering Pines Forest in one of their hiking trips. Their boots stepped on the fallen leaves and made a crackling sound, making them pile up. A strange noise broke the quiet — a high, sad cry, followed by violent moving in the bushes. The noise came from about 40 meters to the southwest, hidden by thick berry bushes full of ripe fruit. Noah had learned about surviving in the wild at summer camp. He held up a fist to tell Chloe to stop. They listened carefully, and soon knew it was a hurt animal breathing heavily. Broken small trees and disturbed dirt showed a messy path ahead. They moved forward very carefully, stepping softly over small sticks. The sounds got more desperate — low cries and weak, unsteady movements. Chloe instinctively (本能地） opened the part of her backpack with first aid supplies, fingers brushing against bandage edges. "Let's move slow and talk quiet," Noah whispered. "Scared animals get more frightened if we make sudden moves." He remembered what he'd learned about animal behavior in biology class last semester. As they got closer, the forest became very quiet. Birds stopped singing in the middle of their songs. Through the shaking tall, feathery plants, they got a quick look at the animal's light brown fur, like a fast-moving shadow. A leg stuck out at a wrong angle, twisted where it should be straight. Chloe thought of what she knew about first aid: the way it was positioned meant a bad injury, and they needed to stop the bleeding right away. Noah checked his compass with a quick move of his wrist; they had ninety minutes before dusk painted the sky soft pink. "Priority: stabilize, disinfect, retreat," he murmured (低声说），mentally going over the wilderness first aid steps he'd memorized. Chloe nodded, clean cloth already in hand, her expression a blend of deep concern and steady determination. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Soft golden light from the autumn sun shone through the tree tops as high school students Chloe and Noah walked through Whispering Pines Forest in one of their hiking trips. Their boots stepped on the fallen leaves and made a crackling sound, making them pile up. A strange noise broke the quiet — a high, sad cry, followed by violent moving in the bushes. The noise came from about 40 meters to the southwest, hidden by thick berry bushes full of ripe fruit. Noah had learned about surviving in the wild at summer camp. He held up a fist to tell Chloe to stop. They listened carefully, and soon knew it was a hurt animal breathing heavily. Broken small trees and disturbed dirt showed a messy path ahead. They moved forward very carefully, stepping softly over small sticks. The sounds got more desperate — low cries and weak, unsteady movements. Chloe instinctively (本 ... ...
